Author herePinning the review/message for people to be aware of the existence of discord server available to ask questions, give suggestions, or have fun and enjoy some of the art of the book that is prepared.https://discord.gg/5aPjRYx5hKHave the Map of Enerias (the world of the game) btw xD
good stuf stuff. at least not that ****ty other **** story we could have voted on. thumbs up for every one who voted for this. you know whats good!
Very bad grammar with gender and other inconsistencies.
This is just more of the same annoying trash that will always be around...................................................................
This CN is surprisingly good. Like the title. This CN is a bunch of light story. Some story has deep meanings, some other story has ambiguous meanings. A creepy story, a tragic story, a beautiful story, a sad story, there are a lot of them in here.Some story is interesting for me, some other story is boring for me. There are a lot of variety genre in this CN. But unfortunately, this CN is not really my cup of coffee. I like Pet King and Trafford Trading Club better than this CN. I love how the story isn't really circling around MC, but I hate the fact that this CN doesn't really has an MC, and that makes it unattachable. This novel can't really chain me.Well,, I'll stop reading this if it reach 50 and I still can't get enough attachment feelings. For now, I will wait quietly in this corner, while eating my cookies. I'll look forward for the next chapter Mr/Ms translator
Yes!!!!! Finally!!!! I FINALLY FOUND ONE!! YESSS IM SO HAPPY T~T THANK YOU!!! God I've been searching something like this for over haft a year now T~T.
One of my four recommended read. Hopefully this passes through the trial read and go to the voting pool. Very irritating intro, since the start is about parents abandoning their children, so if you can get through that then everything is wonderful. MC will have a system that would also have a system space included where MC can train his cooking skills with time dilation included. Really hope that people can pass the intro to read this novel, since it's very interesting to read. This is definitely one of the top three in my four recommended read.
Translation quality: excellent. EndlessFantasy does good work, usually, and this is one of the many times they've not disappointed me. 5/5Update stability: solid. There are no gaps in updates and the chapters aren't cut down to artificially inflate chapter count, as many are. 5/5Story development: slow. I'm at chapter 1175 as of this review and it's only been the last hundred-odd chapters that have had any real overarching story developments or questions answered. That's a big problem, but the foreshadowing is done very well. Every time a question has been answered, I remember asking that exact question. So the author has obviously put a lot of work into developing the plot, they just... did it too slow. Not everything has to be fast-paced immediate resolution, but this just takes it beyond the pale. 3/5 (minus 4 stars for the pace of the story development, plus 2 stars for the intricate, detailed plotting)Character design: good. All of the characters manage to be individuals with memorable personalities, and the MC is "smart". I use that term a bit lightly because his intelligence is more evident because he doesn't explain what he's going to do or why, and when asked to explain his answer is basically "you'll see". It's a writing trick that authors use to make characters seem smarter than they actually are since it's absolutely impossible to write a character that's smarter than the author doing the writing. That isn't a problem at all and is actually good writing. The reason this didn't get a full score is because all of the MC's interactions with people sound like one person talking to themselves. Even though they have distinct personalities, and memorable ones at that, their conversations are ... weird. In any group of people, no two people are going to speak with the same level of wit and joking, but every character in this manages to do exactly that. 4/5 (-2 stars for the samey conversational styles, +1 star for the memorably distinct characters)World background: developed. While the development and worldbuilding comes at you slow, it's another thing the author took into consideration when doing their prewriting. It's detailed and intricate, but as of chapter 1175, it's still sparse. However, given its steady introductions and growth, it's obvious that the author has a lot more planned, and every expansion of our worldview builds on the ones that came before. It's excellent wordbuilding, though not masterclass. 4/5 (-1 star for the pacing, again)Overall: I really enjoy this one. It's a self-insert wish fulfillment face-slapper, but a really good entry in that genre. It doesn't have much of the nationalism you see in typical modern-day urban CNs, but there are a few undertones here and there that point at it. I also think it'll start developing into another cultivation novel, as these kinds of novels tend to do, but until then, this is still a solid novel that I don't regret having read for almost 1200 chapters. That said, the complaints raised in other reviews are absolutely valid - the MC gets rewarded out of proportion with the task his system gives him, and there's quite a lot of face slapping early on because of it. Less so as the novel progresses, but early on it does get a bit ridiculous.
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The Plot is interesting thoo. Btw disc link is expired ?
Wow... Looking forward to read the kung fu..... All those actions...... Lets hope it will be worth stones and wait..... I have been disappointed before..
interesting story that is based on the three kingdom era with a interesting twist based on a game, story writing quality is pretty good with at least a chapter a day although it is premium, character is designed pretty originally with some twists you wouldnt expect. overall good read so far and hope it doesnt change