ROMANS !!!!! ROMANS !!!!
When I saw the title my mind blew up!
For a Italian guy like me, to see someone writing about Ancient Roman history is simply GREAT.
If you focus more on characterization, this novel will be THE NEXT BIG THING.
I'll keep an eye on you
Read up till 100+ and it sucks. I find the "this daddy" so irritating that it ruins the story for me. The plot seems so pointless that he is fighting almost everyone he meets and somehow ends up defeating them. The only thing that makes him "defeat" everyone he encounters is his plot armor. Without it he'd be nothing but a noisy young master who's so weak he can't even defeat his enemies while their number keeps increasing.
The editing is soo bad, its unreadable. The story is nothing new. I get second hand embarrassment from the cornyness. 140140140140140140140.
Acc hate where this has gone... at the start it was all choppy jumping back and forth. Nothing to link up the chapters. Stayed cause thought the idea was interesting and did some what smooth out. However you get to chapter 70 it all goes to sht. Suddenly everything he has learned has gone and it's all bout levels... what happened to all that he has learned?
Based on what the author has written the levels where a quick way to gain power but lead to weak foundation less quality in their power. This is why the mc could take out people with massive cultivation over him. Suddenly none of that matters anymore ? All of it was fluffed up bs and now he is weak af.
Also what the author has said about the mc levels make no sense, at the start he went to level 3 because he cultivated and didn't kill a monster. He levelled but this lead to a weak foundation so he focused on that to make it stronger. Your telling me he didn't cultivate in them 5 years and stayed at the same level ?
Even then, how are the top people in his world more powerful than him? They have to break limits to level and because theyre separated they havent broke that limit to get that high level. Even then with the mc who did level you made him not gain as much levels because he was already so strong but when he did get to the higher levels he was beaten by people with weak foundation and a higher level that shouldn't have mattered.
Doesn't even make sense how the guy knows letty's identity... with everything you put into ch70+ is just bs you have made up to scrape up a sht plot. EVEN with all these fundamental problems I was still gonna carry on but then you bring alice getting ra** in front of him and he doesnt do anything. Author that is messed up, makes no sense at all once again. I am acc really sad bc I like the idea of the story and the interaction between him and his goddess made me laugh.
Felt like readers are being herded to this by editors choice mark on trail read. And all the 5 star reviews. Don’t be mistaken, this novel is absolutely struggling to reach mediocre and escape from trash label. It’s not completely trash, u can read it as last resort in isolation. I mean you could be doing ANYTHING productive, but u can read this too.
Ok, reasons: pairing up bro and sis? Ok, not blood related, but we’re grown up like them till his 18th bday.
When parents are the ones pushing them together? No thanks.
2000 hrs in future, humans went galactic. And Chinese brought the cultural baggage with them all the way? The humour is not completely humour. Because it’s a Chinese novel trying to be Japanese with its strong mother, henpecked dad, beta MC, and Chinese elements. I rated it all 1 because the novel is rated too high for its worth and it needs to be brought down.
u yg utgt tv v yvfrcry c I will be there at all ok here I don't think I have any other ideas I had a guy but he doesn't I don't think I can do that but not sure how much longer do it in a few I have a good night and a talk with her and I will be there at the
Please give it a try, this novel definitely deserve your time. This is my first and only review, as this novel is getting really a little attention despite deserving a much better ranking.
Though the first few chapters are a bit plain and confusing, it will get better and better after 20+ chapters. Read it, you really won't be disappointed as the writing style is really unique.
A sharp, cunning and decisive MC with good character development and some funny moments here and there which you will definitely enjoy.
Though the world building is still lacking, I think it will be explained in time as MC's adventure is yet to begin....
Great so far just keep updating and it might be as popular as chrysalis only if you update frequently tho :3 sooooooooooo just keep updating and plz no harem
This book seems like it could blossom into a great apocalypse novel, although you should try to world build a bit more before continuing I feel like you kind of skipped over that part. But it is a great start, keep up the good work.
I don't often write reviews, but I figured I should try for this one. This review was made as of chapter 76, so keep that in mind.Writing quality: 4.5/5 (Rounded to 5) The only real problems are the occasional mix up of Your/You're and Their/There, but it isn't too bad, and definitely happens less often than some other novels have em. There are occasional misspellings, but they aren't bad. Overall, it is easy to understand what is going on, and what the author meant to say.Stability of Updates: As of now, they are uploading pretty much daily, 5/5.Story Development 5/5: While it may be too early to say, so far it has gone nice, with the main character experiencing many roadblocks in the form of his own teammates, enemy teams, and outside of the game, which makes this story not only about Basketball but the goings-on outside the games and training, which I like personally.Character Design 5/5: As far as his team goes, everyone has a different personality, and that also extends to pretty much everyone else outside the court as well. Though I am pretty sure that eventually, the author will have to re-use some character types, since there is bound to be a lot of characters, both in court and off-court as the MC grows up, but that won't be too much of a problem. Especially when you consider 90% of the Chinese novels on this site re-use the same character type for every villain.World Background 5/5: The world thus far seems mostly like our own, and as he meets people who he recognizes from his past life, we start to get to learn more and more about the basketball scene from his past life, and we start to learn how it influences choices he has and will make.Overall I like the story personally, and the main complaint I have seen is how the MC is lacking in social situations, but when you consider that he has focused on Basketball for 20 years, and pretty much only got a job to stop his parents from worrying, it sorta makes sense that he wouldn't be too good at this stuff.
So far, this nobel has been really enjoyable the only complaint I have is the length of the chapters otherwise its a 5/5
It is a good book with many different characters and reasons to read this book. I recommend using ur power and energy stones to vote for this book.