it's not horrible but the author definitely needs to get an editor to go over the chapters. the grammar isn't unreadable but it's still pretty bad.
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Well i like it. The fact that he takes time. To learn stuff what kept me reading that's all I want to say but looks like u need to 144 char at least . I think this is it see ya
Filled with grammatical errors. Probably MTL copy paste. Only updating stability is the good point of this novel.????????????????????????
Great novel. Have fun reading it. The author has done a good job as you wont find mistakes while reading it.
This book is Written extremely well, I’ve read all 67 released chapters so far and have yet to find any grammatical errors. They story and characters introduced so far, are well thought out. The MC is Cold and ruthless and I just can’t wait for new chapters. World building is is superb, very hard to find a flaw in this story, definitely not a book you will have to worry about plot holes popping up or the MC only surviving because plot armor. Overall a very well written book that definitely deserves a 5* rating. If the stories, description interested you enough to look at reviews before reading the story. Look no further this story is amazing and definitely worth a read.
The title and synopsis don't match the content, like, at all. Just as someone else said, they probably took the title and synopsis of a different story and stuck it on the actual novel to help hide away their dirty deeds of copy/pasting their MTLs and Westernising them. Either way, I enjoy the actual story. Seems less "Chinese carbon-copy"-ish than your usual stories. No young masters, no courting death, no princesses, or the main character acting like an infant human despite originally being an 18-year-old human and now in the body of a dragon. Yes, this story has its a fair share of problems, but it's far better than your other ones. I hope this passes the trial read because I'm absolutely bored and for some reason my mind enjoys chewing up stories like this one.
i love it
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MC is a pushover well past chapter 20. Only read it if you're a fan of cucks. He walks around being a showoff and then is suprised when people take notice.
Looks good, but it got picked up before all 40 chaps were even released? What is going on here?
The other novel that was picked had the lowest view count in the last week trial reads, and now this is being picked with just 30 chaps in. Weird.
Interesting premise, and a pretty cool 'legendary class'.
I feel like I'm reading a romance-type novel that has been put into a video-game shell. Kind of like "Pride and prejudice and zombies".
Not that I'm complaining, I like it so far and I'm only 2 chapters in :)
Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses.
(Also we are around the same ranking - my book is 'My Necromancer Class', so I thought I'd check out your book out and I'm enjoying it, keep it up!)