Shameless rate pls punish me ahhhh~ more punish me more~~~~~ hit me harder~~~~~~~|~~|~~~~~~~~~~~~make it longer~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<~~~~~~~~~~
Thank you for the novel so fat, hope you make a full recovery! Good luck I know you can fight it! As you said come back stronger :) goodluck
It's too early to write a review about background or development and stuff(i gave them 5 kindly), yet i can say 1 thing. The grammar is unbearable. Physically hurts me to see all the errors, mispelled words(even in school, the misspelled words aren't that big of a deal until the mistake doesnt create a new word, with different meaning. Yours usually do. ), 0 sense sentences, absolute chaos in past sentences and other stuff... I am sorry mr. Author but i won't read this story till u edit it....
And you can't say i am mean, because i gave you a 4,2 blindly.
many girls in the harem with female lead role are used soo much before MC that it might be better to call them sl* ts, with teacher having a threesum in her intro while some of them having confusing sxual relationships. Most girls don't have a v-card with some having 100+ body count and some having unknown status that gives disgusting vibe. I recommend author to write ntr novels becuz even without trying it gave me disgusting vibe of ntr novels so imagine if you tried to write it intentionally it might be a hit for people of similar taste as author himself.
This might be early but the synopsis got me hooked already. The plot is interesting and I hope that it would progress even better in the future!
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It's a ok history, but the translation is really horrible. Horrible that looks like MTL. MC is hard working but not good with women. It's fast paced with OP MC.
Thugs are going to get interesting as you go along... but in a heavily political way where America (sorry "Sunset Empire")'s top tech owners amd it's ambassadors, reporters attitude and mannerisms are ripped straight out of a Xantia, the evil overloard template. I mean they are possibly not the greatest people, but easily angered narcissistic neanderthals is the default (& so far only) template.Also the retaliation event later on. I don't think the MC whom is considered a genius by that time (or the author), considers what happened in hospitals, doctor's offices and similarly sensitive infrastructure, this is not a good guy by any means(though he is painted as such).
Beautiful and want more the writing and the details are to the poi and don’t leave me confused and annoyed love this!
Oh God, you've set up the perfect plot with neglect and betrayal. It kind of reminds me of fanfiction but done right. I love how overpowered Noboru is; he's definitely outerversal. I can't wait to see how Noboru humbles his siblings and puts Kaito Danzo in his place, as well as his parents.
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This is an amazing fic, my main gripe with it is the fact that mc is ridiculously lucky, I haven't been able to read past chap 84 due to them being locked but I really loved everything that came before. I just find it odd that he gets the best gear and is generally the most gifted character in the game yet he hasn't even been playing for more than 2 months.
The writing quality is decent enough with a few grammar mistakes and characters talk a bit too much because of run on sentences.
Stability of updates is decent. Not much else to say here.
Story development is amazing, you slowly integrate new pieces of information into the game-verse and expand upon the lore.
Character design is pretty meh, not 1-d but certainly not 3-d. It seems there will also be a tough-girl jade beauty in Frey.
World background like I said is very decent. Nothing else to say except for the fact that the plot is pretty T H I C C.
All in all an amazing novel and it was certainly enough to motivate me to create an account.