I like the concept of the story, but it’s become difficult to read.
- Punctuation and grammatical errors are common, and the writing style overall can sometimes be confusing.
- The story gradually becomes so convoluted with various conspiracies that it takes away from them individually. Also, the MC monologues internally about society too often and for too long; it gets boring and repetitive fast.
- This is just a personal preference thing, but too many of the characters are terrible people. I’m convinced at this point that 80% of the people in the city are just sociopaths. Too often, their reasoning for treating others like metaphorical and literal punching bags is just because they can.
Love the book so far, especially the fact that the Mc did not turn out to one of those that immediately became some cold-blooded killer just because the world had gone awry. I really hope this book continues on
Good plot, terrible execution.
Meant to be a warrior in a world where magic reigns supreme, instead got an MC which focuses too heavily on his magical aspects. His personality ain’t so fun to sit through either.
God gave him a crazy affinity which essentially permanately destroys anything it touches (slowly eats the world) and gave him control over beings which does the same thing, but like an endless army of them.
Then, after that, story goes down from there. MC realizes that he could potentially be an enemy of literally all things living so he became nihilistic and apathetic. Killing innocents, killing children (Mage children obv) and doing anything to further his pursuit of power.
He summons those monsters to get more powerful by absorbing the strongest one and then, without caring about the consequences, allows the rest of the weaker ones to just rampage around, leaving other people to clean his mess. Those monsters don’t care about what they be killing either, so naturally a bunch of villages with normal families also just get turned into dust.
He ain’t shy in throwing the people who has no beef with him (and even somewhat help him) under the bus if they slightly do anything wrong or inconvenience him.
Almost Reverened Insanity-ish but worse since such a personality switch was completely unwarranted, illogical and completely pathetic. I mean, while imprisoned, he taught someone how to be strong and such, but whilst fleeing from the Kingdom, he had to kill him to keep his identity a secret because he recognized him??
What? Why introduce him all together? To change the main characters personality to an unfeeling and uninteresting robot? (There is more to it but if you got to this part then you’ll know what I’m talking about)
Honestly it is such a terrible excuse that after seeing no changes later on, as well as the quality of writing taking a dive (often repeating and worthless paragraphs) I decided to just drop the book.
Going off in a tangent; don’t get me started on the personality on some of these mages either, despite the book saying otherwise, they DO feel like a hive mind - literally no human qualities on some of these guys, just feels like robots in general. I wish there was some form of rivalry or something with the Magic academy, or more Mage companions that sympathize with the warrior cause (or any new companions in general). Or anything to make the world feel more alive, but no we’re stuck with like 6 people, the rest he just kills off or does not care about them in general.
Naturally I did not cover the entire book, and I did not want to either. I wanted readers to know what they’re getting into.
This is not a valiant, brave sword man who would shoulder the pressure of the Magic world so that warriors before him may get stronger. But a cold, unfeeling, unholy Summoner, which so happens to have a pretty sword and strong body that constantly brings out an army of plot devices and throws the main idea of the story out the window cause the author himself doesn’t know where to take it.
Perhaps the author wanted to introduce plot devices to make the story interesting, perhaps not. I could atleast understand the thinking in some of these decisions, but the story is just all over the place.
I personally can’t recommend someone spending money on this book unless you dont mind the MC being a pseudo Calamity Mage with strange applications of Magic and the sword - with the occasional exaggerated panic attacks when he kills something with the slightest bit of significance, of course.
If you are fan of grate futuristic novel this should be for you. There is a lot of stuff happening and chapters are really long (some are 6k words or more ), passing is grate and characters are okay tho it can ruin a bit if you don`t like dense ( or just slow ) protagonist development . But don`t get me wrong there is plenty of action and fight are described colorfully u can make a picture in your mind out of it. I think this novel is work of some manga witch will explain a lot. Hope it gets more attention.
I first thought that it would be just *** and the story will lag, but surprisingly the story is more interesting and the plot holds itself, the *** stuff is secondary. Characters are well developed and even the tertiary characters are nicely portrayed which in turn seamlessly binds the story, plot and the characters.
Thank you for writing this.
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I think it is a good novel. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I've only read up to chapter 45 so my review may be inaccurate but so far the story has been great
Here I am to leave myself a review with shame in hand. Now don't get me wrong Im not gonna leave a real review I just want to say to anyone following my writing welcome to the second book in the myriad realms, thanks for sticking around!
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Perfect... but almost abandoned... I do not know if something happened, but there is almost no release.
How is it possible that people haven't reviewed this book? It is literally better than most translated books. The chapters are very long and there aren't fillers to do so.
At first, I thought this was just a copy of The bloodline system and my vampire system. But no, even though at the start they might seem similar, as the story progresses it becomes better.
I just read 25 chapters and already am in love with it.
Hope that you publish more chapters