This story is alright but it’s quite interesting for me. I would really like to see this get chosen although not as good as Game of life or apocalypse forecast it’s still a solid story compared to some of the other trial read books. Man am depressed that those two didn’t get picked but hey what can you do am I right? Anyway I hope those of you with coins could invest some here so it can be picked, it’s really a interesting concept.
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Ps: Some info- This story will have two main character... Both with different circumstances but related.Also, don't worry, the story won't get confusing because of them :pOne Mc will be a one woman man while the other will have a harem. Further info will be released later
Personally for me this is better than evolution to godNice novel by the wayMaking something like this without adding a system…. wowAnd….Xpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpx
It’s a good idea for a “cheat” novel, but the author just couldn’t keep track of items and people.
I have read about 400 chapters. The story starts off pretty well. The cultivation path is quite interesting. But the MC is a doormat in front of girls. There is the little sister who is not actually his sister since he is blood adopted. She is a real piece of work. Very overpossessive of her brother and take recordings of what he says in a quite innocent manner and twists it so that it seems he said something perverted. She is always blackmailing him about how she is gonna tell everyone about how he wants to sleep with her. Which of course he doesn't(atleast until where I have read) all the while being the only one who wants to be together with him. If the MC thinks like that we can atleast say that it is because she is not his real sister sister since he is a transmigrator. But she has no excuse. Their parents only revealed that the MC was adopted by them on his 18th birthday,that is,when the story begins.Quite possibly one of the most annoying and unlikeable character. On the other hand her friend Alice is pretty good.A somewhat cliche character but till now only she seems normal morally. Also there is an overabundance of super powerful female characters who has a somewhat ambiguous relationship with the MC which makes me think this is going to be a harem. I can't be sure. Another problem I have is while the female characters start off quite strong, the story seems to be inching towards making them dependent on the MC. Yes they do get a lot of power from their own inheritances and hard work, but their power shows a drastic increase after they absorb the energy orbs provided by the MC. Yet another problem is the rest of the characters. While there exist a lot of powerful male characters, they remain in the background. Till now we are acquainted with a couple of strong male characters but they are only shown once in a while. The other mob characters exist only to admire the MC and be envious of him. The only good thing here is that there is no stupid cannon fodders who intentionally fights with the MC and get thrashed. They are often too afraid of his power and cultivation speed. The faceslapping and fighting is reserved for the alien races.
hello...can you please address about the vp...mc is so trusting to him.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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the story quite good but the mc is too op. most soul land fanfic create too op mc like exagarated first spirit ring. the system is ok. not too much other novel influence.
Can't wait to read more. Not normally a fan of story's with "Cheat" systems, but the way this is playing out it's more based on strategy and smarts of the main character.
I liked how the author paced the story. This is the one thing that is hard to see in the many stories here in Webnovels. Things are flowing smoothly and the events shift properly. it's not all over the place unlike some of the stories I had read. The narration and dialogues used was not forced and it gave life to the characters. I look forward to seeing more of this wonderful novel. More power to the Author.
The concept is good and the story looks nice; however, it's filled with run-on sentences, grammar problems, and has a few rare spelling errors. The writing quality is what's holding back your work.