reborn in Usotsuki lily fan-fic

I liked how the author paced the story. This is the one thing that is hard to see in the many stories here in Webnovels. Things are flowing smoothly and the events shift properly. it's not all over the place unlike some of the stories I had read. The narration and dialogues used was not forced and it gave life to the characters. I look forward to seeing more of this wonderful novel. More power to the Author.

The chapters are the longest of any story in Quidian I've seen so far!  I like that!  So far the story is great and I'm into it!  Also I haven't noticed being annoyed by bad grammar so the translation is among the best on this site.

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روايه رائعه جدا اتمنى ان تستمر في تحديث الفصول دائما ولا تسقطها تعجبني جيانَ نينغ جدا انه حذر من أجل مصلحته ولكن أيضا ليس جبانا بحيث يفوت الفرص لرفع قوته يستغل الفرص التي تاتيه دايما ومع ذلك فهو عقلاني

Is thare Romance..? in this story.? anything.? Seggs.? love.? other things.?

Hui Yin looked at Jiang Xu and reached out to straighten his tousled hair. Jiang Xu obligingly leaned his head closer so that she didn't have to strain her arm.