Fantasy9428
This story is direct, concise, and focused. The writer writes every sentence with a purpose. These are usually strong elements of writing, and most stories fail in these areas, but not in this case. This story is like pure alcohol, it does it's job so well there's no room for flavor.I'm early in the story, so things may change later on, but in the beginning the main character never really has time to leave an impression. He does things, and things happen, but no particular attention is given to him as a character. Because of this, I lost interest in him.
This is a beautiful piece. almost cried
has this been abandoned? or is it still being updated?
Where's the rest of the chapters?
hello where are the other pages of thrs story...
Niger Delta
Great book
too short chapter more pls
please upload more chapters
Well written. Excellent plot.
I am loving this so much. I get excited everytime more is added and can't wait to see how it ends
:) nice story
