just here to review for a fastpass eventl
I read 202 chapter and was interested in the story in the story until mc lost his all good points, after being possessed by some sin mc become arrogant, careless, does not give his all, in fight he explain his abilitys to the enemy like a trash cultivator mc, I wasted hours on this novel to find out that mc after 160+ chapter become trash, the most frustrating thing was how I didn't know who I read about, was the mc thinking this or was he mind bended, or was this the sins thought? It was super confusing,.I would recommend the first 150 chapter, after that good luck. It became more frustrating to read after each chapter how mc became more and more......... useless, ye useless compared his previous self.
Its a great comedy.You should write more chapters, while sometimes the story is a litlle weird its that that males this story so fun.__________________________________________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------so im waiting for more chapters
Great story and great chacter very instresting story i liked it alot definitely worth the time to read it 10 out of 10 i recommend to some of my other friends
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Good storyline!! It's interesting to read, story is moving smooth , although writing quality is also nice but needs some more improvements waiting for more updates , good job keep it up author!!
Still waiting for the author to announce why roy has the program and why he is obsessed with killing that person.There are a bit too many characters and complicated relationships, and I often struggled to remember the names of various fictional characters to keep going. Need to go back and read it all over again.
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The author here with a totally biased reviewI've wanted to start consistently writing a story for a while now, so I'm trying to use this as a way to motivate me to not only write more but also improve on things such as grammar and style.I'll be trying to get this story posted at least once a week and with a goal of 1000 words for a page from now on.So thanks to those who stick around to see me fling myself at writing and hope I hit a bullseye.
oh my!!It has system! I love system oriented, daily missions? okay, is done! Building Kingdoms? okay I'm reading!!! lolWant more!Be careful he is lazy, like to have idle days!!!
I'm on 55 and I have to say I love this book... I just wish kat could do magic now like her the mages but I guess not... and I wish the book was still going and that it wasn't so far ahead so whoever wrote it sees this mess and could have integrated it with her and I really do wish this book was still going and never ended and or put out more then one volume off the book and or writes another book just like it with that same compassion and emotion and everything that's in this book everything in this book makes sense and crashes great together I just wish it didn't end
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