It starts off in a way you know it'll be complex but it's a really good book, it's obvious that the Author put in a lot of work in it. Not to put out any spoilers I'll advice you to try a couple chapters and trust me when I say you'll be hooked.
It's an interesting novel so far but I wasn't able to put up with the quality of the translation and editing to finish reading the first 40 chapters, it's clearly MTL with average at best editing.
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Esta buena la historia solo sube más rápido los capítulos y que se harén para ver. Como sería en hollywood tener esa tipo de relación y que aparescan actores y actrices y que avance mas rápido el tiempo
A chance encounter with Q results in the crew of the Enterprise switching personalities and abilities. Picard is now obsessed with honor, Worf is a neurotic scientist, Wesley is a mature and levelheaded counselor, and Q himself is exploring his newfound humanity. But while the rest of the cast explore their new emotional and physical natures, trouble is brewing in Engineering, as a malevolent consciousness has awoken in the now Omnipotent Data.
This novel irritated me so much. The author has to remind me non stop that the MC is by no means talented and comes from a common family etc.And no matter how many incredible power ups the MC gets, his friends etc always stay around his power level because plot armor. Also the MC is incredible dense, for god sake.. when you are 13-15 years old you do know whats going on between men and woman. Also, half of the story is filled with chapters about the MC eating so much and people reacting crazy to it + every fight there has to be paragraphs of golden dragon body transformation and dragon roar descriptions... It's just boring to be honest.There is a lot more irritating stuff like the stupid blacksmith chapters that are all more or less the same about him hammering alloys and shocking people about his young age and blacksmith star level. TLDR: This story got massive plot armor with a dense MC and lots of repetitive writing. Boring side characters who all have there secrets and author reminds you of those things all the time but it takes hundreds if not thousands of chapters and hundreds of author reminders before you get an explanation.
I like the story, the only things I do not like are the facts that he is not the only reincarnation anymore and the stupid love triangle.I seriously feel several chapters worth were wasted by introducing a love triangle as to me, they don't add anything to the story and it was too late in its introduction to make it help in drawing in a female crowd.The romance aspect of the story is poorly constructed which just further lowers its value. I suppose it is done in an effort to do character building but it seems to have the opposite effect. The drama makes the MC seem more and more bland.I do like how humanity isn't alone in the universe, and the way the story is set up to evolve from there, with infighting between factions and aliens.
There's not that many bad things to say about the story just enough to make you stop bothering about it once you reach the last free chapter. The author force a lot of stuff to make the story develops how he want it. The Mc does not reflect the fact that he reincarnated he lives with kids and he is perfectly integrated with them, the author could just have chosen a kid from that world as mc it would have been better.