Writing Quality - Great third pov. Either way, I am a sucker for 3rd pov. There is feeling a of darkness and mystery as we see the journey of Mc. Story Development It is stable I felt it was slow during the initial first chapter but who doesn't live seeing Mc in pain and feeling the misery of losing her parents? Oh! you guys don't. Weird ?.Character Design: My fav thing about this novel is that Mc is great She doesn't just get used to the family secret or any of her new family bs. She goes with the flow but can feel she just doesn't magically forget the people who took care of her for 10 years.Updating Stability: You are doing great work author. Quality over Quantity.World background: Full of mystery Satanic stuff. The author is just great at writing dark themes. Would love to see the school arc
It's good. It has a typo here or there but for the most part the grammar and spelling are pretty good.
Interesting enough for a read, great concepts but the execution is bit odd
Instead of scaling stat values to a lower range we start with random numbers in the hundreds when stats in the double digits would have done the exact same thing, it's like Diablo 3 stats in a novel where you can reach 1T and it means nothing. The DP system is even more ridiculous, Author thought numbers had to be big to have any meaning when 100DP could have been made to be something extremely difficult to reach.
When Irene is introduced the novel becomes much more annoying to read as well, at least 25% of every chapter with her is describing her beauty because we, as readers are too dumb to have understood from the introduction, no, literally every sentence with her has to describe her beauty...I just skip over any areas where I see her name now, occasionally I check back and it's a waste because all I was missing is worthless info about her appearance. Expect to encounter chapters wasting 50% or more detail describing how amazing, mysterious and powerful she is for absolutely no reason other than Author thinks we're all idiots. This novel may as well be a tribute to a woman he likes called Irene.
World background seems really interesting though, the only other annoying part is how he introduces characters and names, instead of normal descriptions we get "HELLO BOBBY, EVIL DRAGON CAT DOG FALCON MAN GODBEAST THE THIRD, TWICE REMOVED, KING OF TOKYO, LORD OF DRAGONS, BREAKER OF CHAINS, MOTHER OF DOGS, LEADER OF BLACK CAT GUILD, MOST RESPECTED ANCIENT BEING" and equally ridiculous introductions that are somehow supposed to be taken seriously
Spelling is good, grammar is decent, that's saying a lot for Webnovel so kudos to Author.
All in all, decent read if you have nothing else.
Interesting, but style and grammar are not the author's forte. His writing style is all over the place, falling prey to traps like "But that's a story for another time."Also, the main character doesn't seem to behave like a wise sage would.
After writing 100 chapters, I decided to do a new author review.I have gotten a great response so far, and that gave me a boost of motivation to keep writing this; and after writing 100 chapters, I already know that the story is only beginning, there is so much left to write, and I have a hunch that it will take easily over 1000 chapters to complete, maybe even 2000.Second, I have gotten a few toxic messages about how MC's looks, because he looks girly and is around 170cm, so I have gotten a lot of messages about making him taller, etc., and that may happen or may not, I am not going to spoil it, but I have reasoning for his looks and his height, and none of those will change before I am ready to reveal the reasoning of his looks and what happened in his childhood.Third, I have written a lot of mystery, and I enjoyed it immensely. I have given a few subtle hints on the chapters that might reveal why MC is different from the rest, and that White Online isn't as normal as it seems at first, so good luck on finding those.Fourth, I have seen a few theories made by my readers, and I am sometimes terrified of how well you guys found out about some things which still haven't been revealed yet; it is nice to see all kinds of theories, even though some aren't correct, but it is still nice to read those.Fifth, about a love interest. Some of you guys might have read the synopsis and seen the tags, but I will still say this. This will be a No Harem novel with only one love interest, and even if some of you guys like Harem, you guys should still try and who knows, some of you might like it. I decided to lock the chapters only around the 53th chap so that everyone has enough time to read and find out if they like it enough to keep paying for more chapters.Thanks, everyone for reading, and I hope you guys support me in this very long journey.
It is a pity that this novel was ruined by the arrogant I have a plot armor so I do what I want sickness.The MC and his disciples ignore all rules and get away with it because they have the bigger fist.Example MC does not kill enemy Elder during a big event because that would be against the rules, but next second he helps his disciple to kill him in front of an exam venue full of people.The MC and his disciple might be justified, but they literally flaunt their ability go break the rules because they are stronger as often as they can.It makes no sense for the MC to hide inside a sect mountain and not look for disciples to increase his strength. He can see the talent of others.The entire origin story of the MC, or better the truly exciting parts of this story, get skipped and the novel starts with an OP MC taking in his 3rd and most brainless disciple.This could have been great, but it is just trash.
truman show vibes from this novel............................................................................................................................
I really loved the novel. It's super great :D... I hope it gets more chapters. I will definitely start recommending this to more people :D
hello guys author here I don't know how many of you guys are reading this book but I really appreciate you guys for your support i promise to keep being consistent let's interact I will always reply
one of the best novels on webnovel one of the best novels on webnovel the only one in the world of the world of the night ??? and the world of the world ???? and the author is i just let my phone fill the rest of it lol
I am honestly in love with this book. Get me two strong leads and I'm good to go. I love Genevieve's spirit, and Alec's arrogance. ??The style of writing is chic, the use of words spectacular. I am wowed.
A marvelous and applause for a great start! Martial Arts action novel is never really my thing but you broke that. Another action that will make the readers go crazy when reading this?