Mc is smart and thinks way ahead, that pacing is really good and the mc is evil but not so evil that he would throw someone close to him way he does still value people. There’s more that is good but it worth a read and it’s great to see the mc bully and gaslight protagonist.
It’s kinda annoying that you introduce this card system and barely even tell us what cards he gets. I know it’s alot but still it would be nice if we had a just a general idea like like out of this pack we got a artifact or out of this pack we got a summon ect and not just we got some random stuff so you can just make up things on the fly as you think of them also you havent actualized vlad which is tilting yet you actualized the other lengendary as soon as you got it and tried another but the system went on cool down. Tbh I’m reading for the gacha system and kingdom building alone but it feels like both of those things kinda just get brushed aside and we don’t get to see the progress of said things just the result. And this whole hearm thing you are trying to do feels really japan and vanilla asf where we don’t see anything and it gets left up to our imaginations at that point why even add it at all. Also the mc is kinda a sImp reminds me of normal isekai wimp protags
I must complain. HOW*** can this not get picked. It's way better than that trash called low Dimensional Game. It made more sense. Plus the way he cured his cancer in low Dimensional Game was too easy. I really hoped against everything thing that this novel would get picked, especially since the editor was behaving as if he had common sense by at least picking some good books. But webnovel managed to disappoint yet again. I mean look at previous cases like Transcendent Dawn and lord of Enigma and dimensional codex(this one
hurts just as much as nurturing humanity) I really did hope every week this book was there that it would get picked since reading mtl is so frustrating and with it being an extremely good book. But don't expect anything from webnovel I have learnt this the hard way. From now on I will not read books on trial read and will only check the books that get picked. If u read review to the end, I thank u for your patience to listen to my complaint
should be renamed everybody is kung fu fighting, while my farm system gives me kung fu.
ffs why do "farming" novels always include cultivation. this is totally brain dead troupe novel. system is totally absurd, so everything you plant gives you tree of smth. you plant money, it gives you tree of money, you plant nonsense paper with cultivation, it gives you "real" cultivation based on that paper, you plant sh it, it gives you tree full of sh it.
only character development is breast of few female characters.
OMG, I will totally agree to what the rest of the reviewers have mentioned. I had goosebumps while reading the first chapter alone. One word Impeccable. The plot, the writing style everything seems to be a class apart. I bow to the author. Way to go.
very interesting online novel because I can actually see the attachment between the real sense and the fiction but one thing that I love is that the author has a real sense for perfect setup
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Oh, what a coincidence there is a novel with the same plot here in a webnovel.... COINCIDENCE. Okay, i don't like the original why i will like this copy ?
This novel is fun and engaging with the readers!
We get to know what happened right at the beginning and author does a fantastic job in detailing the surroundings. It makes you really wonder what would happen next for MC and you are the one to choose his path!
Amazing work!
I recommend!!
The story has a nice feel to it and I can feel that it is as good as the King Avatar!
I wish that there will be a POV on the other team in the earlier chapter to discuss their roles. Then the story will be most perfect. But then, the author moves on straight to the tournament instead of the boring POV which may slow down the pace. So I actually have no complains.
Good story, keep up the good work author!
The interactions of the four main characters are truly realistic, it felt like these buddies are your best friends! Yes, I mean it, the dialogues are blending with great execution on what conversations should be, what the talks in real life should be.
All of those are thanks to the author's writing quality, as well as the style. Try to spot the grammatical errors, but you can't!
Oh, you realized that this novel is powered by science, physics, and stuff? Don't be afraid of that, the way the narratives are written will allow you to understand them without the help of google's assistance.
I wonder why the heck those things got stuck in the mid-air. Fantasy strings? Quantum strings? I don't know. Read it to find out!