Story is pretty solid and has potential but pacing is abysmal. Story drags way too much and mc progresses very slowly. Way too much filler rubbish that can be condensed. Feels like a slog way too often
like seriously
i love anti-hero it's one of the best genres that i like and this novel has given me a good anti-hero for now its 5 star i will continue reading and see how it goes
im in chapter 31 i just want to say it's fucking good but is this complete or hiatus or drop? because why there's no update for 3 months?
The only problem of this book is the chapter update Come on man at less 5 chapter a week.actually review good romance good world building good overpowerd main character. He have three different personalities nice group of friends.
it's a great book to read I enjoy it but the only problem is that gravity should be a supreme attribute cuz it goes in depth with physics and if you can create a black hole that then you can do almost anything like travel back in time/forward in time to and you can rip atom's apart there for you can create anything that is matter and you can absorbs energy likes it's nothing and there for you can create a sun/a planet or just a cheeseburger
this was picked last year but was not released and now taking a break? hey webnovel what's ur conspiracy? hahahaha trash app
Most MMO Novels always begin with Main Characters who began with a 'Cheat', and this MMO is no different. As far as I can tell from the few Chapters so far, the Novel can be promising but is unlikely to be memorable. It's good for a nice, satisfying read, but will be unlikely to leave anything behind. A typical, decent story, I guess.
please oh please don't drop this book. I don't want to be without this story.
Don't know where to start from. So I'll start from anywhere.
1) The writing quality got me like... Wow. Don't know about you, but I didn't see any error while reading.
So good job author
2) The story development is on a whole different level. Hope you keep it up.
3) Character design is perfect. Especially our Alexander the first.
4) Despite the time and dedication our author is putting in this novel. He still updates everyday, what a perfect author.
5)World background; It is so perfect, that I feel like reincarnating there. Still hope on God anyway.
Please edit and re-release the first chapters. Could not get past the first half of chapter one due to all the grammatical errors. For an English reader it is very offputting to think that the author thought it was acceptable to publish their work without a proper edit. I am not able to stomach reading past the first chapter with the sheer number of incorrect sentences I had to make sense of.
I like the idea behind the novel and love political struggles/strategy/kingdom building/action/adventure but I hate improper English.
Hi guys, I’m writing between 1 and 2 chapters a day, I’m a student at university and I have a part time job on the side so I can’t do anymore.
Anyway if you could drop by and leave me a review, good or bad as long as it’s constructive I’ll take it and try to become better using your advices. You can also comment on the chapters I do my best to answer every one of them.