Lots of grammar mistakes and tons of bad wording, along with the story jumping the gun often and having it's pacing increase drastically. Characters are pretty well designed however for a lot of important characters the author forgets how he described them even with his knowledge of the world from reading through it, changing how they act and making them entirely different people from how they were initially described. (not as in seeing into the characters but more as in he's changing the characters themselves). The world background is the worst part, if i could give it a lower rating i would. There is almost to explanation of the world, like how it seems to be a fantasy world with modern and maybe even sci-fi elements within.
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It's an alternate historical work which gives the vibes of "Pirates of the Caribbean". Tbh, it's been a while since I last read anything related to the Roman Empire and Byzantium. The story is packed with action and adventure. I'll seriously recommend this book to the history lovers. Good work author!!
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My favor goes to the side of destiny... oop**! Great start ark! Looking forward for more updates! (can't wait!) I added your story to my library to follow the progress of the main :D
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