He has very noble dream.
Su Shi slowly removed her eye patch and slowly opened her left eye, the eyes looked as if it was carrying the whole universe, this is because it was not an eye that you will see on a regular human as the usual white part of the eye was covered in a deep blue universe that consisted of so many stars and planets.
Novel is good. Author is sometimes late but I love the story line and how author lewdly explains every intercourse scene and the characters describing is just awesome. Update it on more regular basis??
The Story Is Touching And Gives A Promise Of Comfort For People Going Through Similar Things Who Come Across It.
"Jeez, let's go, guys! Life Guild!" I shouted.
I’m a big fan of his other works so high expectations for this.
This novel is actually pretty good. It took me around 50-100 chapter to really get into it though. The power system is cool and fleshed out. Characters start pretty dull imo but the author fixes that. The different power systems in the novel are really cool. The world building is interesting and gives the story potential to go through a lot of routes. Thanks for writing this story redsun!
Good job author, incredible story but please don’t drop it!
This novel is just wonderful.Despite the need for improvement in the writing and its structure, the story is still enjoyable.The moment I started reading the first chapter, I instantly remembered novels about self-discovery, like “The Alchemist” for example, and truly this did not disappoint.It’s clear. It’s precise. It knows what it wants to tell you and does exactly that.Great work! ?
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I will be reviewing 3 sections; quality of the text, characters, and the setting only, as those were the ones that did not receive full stars.The quality of the writing is well thought out and written well, and I didn't encounter any grammatical mistakes. It reads well and fluidly.The story so far a bit confusing, and I'm not exactly sure what it will lead up to, so maybe add foreshadowing here, and there in a few chapters -- would be nice.For the final section, the setting needs to be more detailed and explained. The character's emotions and actions are explained pretty well, but the environment and setting description could use more polish. We have a general idea where the characters could be, but it's not explicitly clear to what place a character could be at during some important event, like the battles or the walking down the river, what are the surroundings? It would be a nice touch to add the full surroundings of where the characters are to build the world better.Overall, it is a good read, I like the idea of the taming!
Wow! Another enthralling, intriguing, and great story I've ever read. The storyline is perfectly planned, every chapter was written adequately. Such a great book from you Author. Added it to my library, good luck and I'll be waiting for more chapters.