Very interesting story so far. The author has only briefly covered farming so far (at chapter 9 atm) but the world he has created and the story itself has me quite excited to see where this goes.
how do i vote for this piece of potato that i like? someone tell me hhahhahahahahbecause thisbis some good shizSo thats that i hope this continues
This is so bad and very cringe to read and every one in this novel is a scum and the biggest of them all is MC.Well it's my opinion of this novel and some people might enjoy it.
I love this book it is addictive and interesting and is super underaited I recommend this to anyone looking for something unique or addictive I hope the author does not dropp this or get bored of writing this the author could add in new things to make it less borring like him conquering planets with his powers or with the help of others or another idea is adding kingdom building elements or going to fictional worlds or sci-fi worlds I hope the author adds in those things and I hope the author makes a 1000+ chapters
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i read this and was so confused at the logical inconsistency.every piece that was logically inconsistent was a piece that was not in the original translation.Google translate of original was better than this translation.i do hope that they carry this book but have it retranslated from scratch because the story itself is really interesting!
So let’s review this story, I’ll be honest the story ain’t exactly groundbreaking in any way, however I still do enjoy it a bit. My main problems with the story mostly comes from the lack of editer, I’m not sure if it’s just me, but I feel the stories writing feels incredibly hectic at points, not in a fast paste way, but just jumping really quickly between various actionsThe characters are shockingly more fleshed out than your typical wuxia novel which is honestly surprising to me so kudos to you on that Game mechanics are iffy at best and awful at worst, I generally dislike the perma death game thing that a few novels have, xp distribution is also a bit questionable. I feel like author could have benefitted from just making it a system novel with a gate system like “super gene”My best suggestion to you author would be find a friend you trust to give an honest opinion and make him proof read it a little bit
If you are looking for a kingdom building novel that is realistic and similar to "release that witch
The Bai rip him off everything in the Auction, at first he got attention and treated well because he might be the son of some legendary figure and when they found out he is not they discard him and treated him like ****, next when they think he got some potential they made him apologize to the lady who rips him off in the Auction and also made him her bodyguard in some exploration, also he got arouse by the ladies from Bai family, this sums up the character of the MC, he is basically a dog and a skirt chaser.
A must read. Not your typical I slap you every other chapter novels ( liberty of heaven path - webnovel modify the dam vote, i.e + other). Don’t bother voting in here.Story 7/5Characters 10/5World building 10/5Power level progressing 10/5Fighting descriptions 10/5Chapters engaging: start 4/5, quarter 10/5, mid 11/5Reality level (make “some” sense) 5/5Aurther Brainstorming Time 10/5Education level : College to Bachelor +
I really enjoyed this book I would love if the author can bring more chapters to finish the book was left at a seriously huge cliff hanger but still enjoyed the read been a long time since I read a book and this one was the first in a long time.
As you have read the reviews you would know that the grammar is terrible but it is not enough for the low rating. there are many issues with the novel. The strat was nice but things downgrade quickly. He gets his 1st girlfriend within a day who also accepts all the things he says such as cultivation. She also quickly comes to the fact that he needs a lot more women. She doesn’t seem to be reluctant about it and even actively finds more girls for him. This happens very quickly that itis unreal. All the following characters are similar.They are like ‘I can’t accept sharing.’ Then ‘reluctantly’ accept due to his body which requires more women then bam...they also actively search for new ‘sisters’. All beautiful women he comes across are gonna emd up with him. We cannot even distinguish between them. There is no character development and the world building is horrble. There is no story or struggle. The novel is basically a collection of cliches.