I read this like 6-7 months ago and i thought you dropped it even though it was a great story, i just now remembered it so ima reread it.
Having to pay starts way to earlyBut the idea is great and interesting oejbduusnsjjskksnsnnsjsjsmmsnshcnbkaijdngdusjsujdjd7cjnfbrisoufbtcoe
You can already see from the first few sentences, that is this an amazingly high quality and well-written novel.I honestly have no complaints, wish I did so that I could have more to write about but no, this is just too good for words to even describe.The narrative is perfect, so much so that I'm taking notes on how you manage to narrate, while having such a clear description of this world with a build-up of suspense and intrigue.
Someone spoil me regarding the MC's Father pls.
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This is utter trash with dumb mc....I don't even know what to comment anymore ???Welp, i'll still read this though... i want to test my patience... see how far i could get before i smash my phone in anger ??
This might be wrong, I'll explain below.Title: 附身校花，她魅魔身份被我发现了Author: 里香的腿毛Status: 49 Chapters (doesn't seem to be ongoing)So, sometimes Webnovel seems to take stories from other sites than Qidian and this might be the case here, I can't tell for sure. The skills for example are exactly the same but the names of characters are different.
The only unique thing is the new concept of the system, other things like world background and plot are nothing new and even quite lame to a certain extent, I'm not fond of harem and early romance, so when the mc entangles with women right in the first several chapters, I got turned off instantly. Not my cup of tea.
I thought it might be interesting, since I like these kind of RL system novels, but honestly this has been pretty disappointing. It's just so repetitive - basically every scene is 'MC goes to some rich place/just a place in general, gets looked down on, faceslaps', rinse and repeat. There's no real story or plot here, it's pretty clear the author's just phoning it in.
This is good novel with fast paced, highly recommend..............,...,.....................................................................
Author, don't feel down trodden your work isn't perfect but then again no book is perfect. Not everyone will like your story-telling but that doesn't mean you have to change your story to fit their exact desires. Create the story you like, obviously improve on some logistical points like timeline, history reference accuracy, mythology accuracy and grammar. I saw many comments disdaining the usage of hypnosis for kingdom building, personally it doesn't matter as long as it matches the MC's personality. It does seem a little rushed however. Damn this was a long comment, keep up the good work!
It's a 5 ? masterpiece for me...+no grammatical mistakes or plot holes™pros:✓~ MC is smart, challenging, funny, charming & he's actor afterall ??~ story is not repetitive ~ No cliche scenarios & author really put work behind Interactions (absolutely beautiful)~ A support system which works with hard work, time & popularity... ~ Multiple direction growth (Actor, writer & singer... it'll be more in future ? ).Cons :~ None~ well if I really have to absolutely give one then ... he's single ( tho I can understand as his career is still starting .. so there's that )☺️...Good luck @Dreamthree for creating this awesome book ?.... I have come to love characters , especially #Aiden our mc & Wade our snarky agent ...Recommend ?+