I had high hopes for this novel, but as I kept reading (until chapter 230) I got more and more frustrated with the constant face slapping, young masters who are more arrogant and entitled than the Son of Heaven, and rampant two-faced corrupt characters at every turn. The MC is supposedly 30 years old, but behaves like a teenager, and there's a ton of unnecessary drama, which have no meaning to the plot.In time I just got fed up with the constant corruption at every level, and then having the MC pull a deus ex machina to get out of trouble by involving his girlfriend.This story is like fast food - feels okay to read a couple of chapters, but after that you quickly get tired of the rehashed and repetitive corrupt, entitled, arrogant, and ego-centric characters who are more shallow than a piece of paper.And don't get me started on how everything is solved with violence at every turn in a modern developed society. One thing I learned when reading this joke, is that corruption is rampant in China and everything is solved by oppressing the weak.In short, trash story with no character development, 2d cardboard copy characters, repetitive non-sensical plot.2.4/5
Well I would say for sure that it's an interesting book I don't normally leave reviews on books but this one is definitely worth it very simple writing style it easy to understand what is happening keep on updating
Betrayed by Japanese while they are being invaded by other races hahhahJapanese are the bad guys again..........................
This is a perfect example of what loss in quality looks like. Not sure if this was edited after MTL but, somehow I pushed through 16 chapters. I can put up with math that doesn't add up. I can look past Chinese nationalism. I can normally even give a story 20 chapters with MTL if the story is good. This is not
The story is absurd. I am currently at chapter 110 and all I can say is this story is a waste of brain cells. Not going to suggest this story to anyone.It starts with a scenario similar to Everyone else is a returnee. But that's it. The story just goes off tangent and stops making any sense.To give you an idea I will briefly explain what the **** has me ranting about. MC is a loner invisible guy. Time stops and he is left alone. He spends 300 years acting as an idiot. Instead of training his skill or enjoying himself, all you find him is crying about his past and how he seems to forget everything. Fine. We can understand that MC is depressed and so on. But 300 years? And let's not forget all the time skips. Author just out of nowhere drops a time skip. 10 yeast passed, they practiced for 20 years...it's annoying.And then you have the author mucking about. She's trying for comedic effects, but he is trying so hard that all that comes out is depression. God Realm where the arc stops making any sense. It's so wrong....I don't even know what to say. You have mind locks, NPCs and other stuff which just DO NOT merge well into the story.And when people do come alive the story just goes bat **** insane. Do you remember how hard was it to find magic stones? Well, the story starts and you have 'The player who first entered the game.'Do you get it? Player who entered the game. You don't have people awakening and then hyperventilating because every thing is wrong. Nope. It's a game . The first player than purchases magic stones, few million magic stones mind you. WTF? Are you writing a VR game novel or are you talking about real world. You don't have anyone rioting, crying, screaming. No cults preaching Apocalypse. No military efforts to bring every thing in control. No common man trying to kill himself because he just list everything. Nope. It's just another day. Everything is normal. People immediate adapted to this whole fucking game world. You already have guild and villages. Hunters using mechas and what not. Like seriously?If all you wanted was a game world then why didn't the **** you just created a VR novel. No sense of realism.And if that wasn't enough. The same MC who was crying for his crush and his parents, didn't even think about visiting them. It's not like I wish he would. But what's with all this inconsistent character development. After chapter 100, when people awaken, the MC starts acting like an NPC. Which honestly makes no sense. If it was like they legendary Mechanic where he acted like NPC to earn benefits, I could under. But this ...rubbish.All I cay say is : Waste of time. It's just around 250 chapters long but I was already feeling drowsy 100 chapters in. The stupid change was just the final hammer.Not going to suggest this story. Ever.
very good I am enjoying the romance. this story has a lot of potential and it is very interesting to see how the MC develops.I hope that the author continues with good work and only improves.
I think this has great potential, writing quality is not the best, but the story line and the character development is very realistic. I can't wait to see where this leads.
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Read till the latest chapter and I can confidently say that it truly excites me. The idea is new and the flow is kept clean and precise. No bullsh8 as far as I've read. Makes me anticipate the future chapters.
Hi there! Thank you for even making it this far! This is my attempt at a holistic breakdown of this work, but please keep in mind that it is my first time writing a story of this genre. TLDR: Not a typical OP ML who levels up in a game. More of the journey (both mental and in-game) of a top eSports player. Inspired by actual eSports players and discusses their struggles, games, and career. Writing Quality: Clear and understandable writing with minimal grammatical errors. Generally reread and edited at least twice before publishing. I personally pride myself on vivid descriptions of scenery and emotion and try to add small Easter eggs or foreshadowing, but it might read a bit wordier than most works of this genre.Stability of Updates: Pushing for an update at least once every two days. I am a current student, so please excuse me if I disappear for a few days. That being said, if you vote and comment, chances of me updating or even giving a mass release are very high :3Story Development: Will be a moderately paced story, roughly divided into four quarters that mirror the ML's place in life: 1. Casual Play 2. Rise of eSports 3. Height of eSports Career 4. Forced towards Retirement/New Commercialization Trends *A lot of the plot drivers will be personal growth, both career-wise and interpersonal relationship-wise, so do not head into this story expecting a straight leveling up story.*Character Design: Very realistic character designs, with each person complete with their own strengths and flaws. More importantly, there will be character growth and development. World Background: Realistic setting that mirrors the history of eSports. The game, Kings of Valor, is loosely based on popular MOBAs such as League of Legends, except with different names, champions, and champion skills. (And yes I play League a lot ;-; Tbh wayyy more than I should for my own good)Warnings: Not the typical videogame story that focused on the game itself or the somehow OP ML but instead centers around character development, gamers' relationships to family and friends, societal expectations, and choosing between dreams and reality. Disclaimer: All coincidences with real life names and events are not intentional and are not intended to offend anyone.Enjoy! To see if people actually read through these reviews...if you play League, attach a GIF of your main! Also, if you wanna support me through Ko-Fi for the new Diana Ultimate skin, I swear I'll update ;-;