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Please bring over the new chapters! I don't care if its in bulk every once in a while but reading on ww mobile is really annoying, you guys have a much slicker web design
that is a f***ing Interesting idea for a story premiseif this story has decent adversaries and predicaments, then we are gold........,............ .................................mmm
I’ll see how this series is………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..
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Is this gonna be like that fish novel but without body changing Into another species ? Also on another note...That kungfu novel got selected
One more story about profession. It is like fresh air in compare to boring slapping novels. Director, producer promoter jobs and so on, it looks relatively realistic so you can be absorbed into story flow. And I definitely want more chapters to read.
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A realy good story. A new type about a coach in a tag of weak to strong. But there are parts that are odd in the story. Because of the system he gains, he is like a new rpg build he gains lvls geting stronger class or ranks, titles and equipment. Even moded skill to mutiply abilty, which in turns bothers the story at it core, the main lessens the impact of this with his high learning abilty, so he learns from others in what he is missing that the system did not give, what ether i missed or the story did not point out is how he is improving base abilty like training, training route, training time which the effect is mutiplied, is he improving it or is the effect improving in these tpyes of stories drama improves the story but too can hurt it like, his strengh is weak to his peirs or that he jump teirs to fight them so they are the same. drama that does not match the base of the story's main, the system can make him stronger than all others make the fights seem repeated or the arcs, just to make him stronger in this case change him to different fields helping out with other things or people gain a lot of poeple he has trained, making poeple stronger, or stronger then weaker just to be self centered gain strenghth at the cost of other or give them back what they once lost. He is the best those he trains is the best or better then they once was, in short the story is a 5/5, the charater desigh is a 3/5 or 4/5 if they point out more, the world background is a 3/5 they only talk about things related to the main, story development is a 4/5 it's story advancement is good the pact is good but could be better, the rate of update is great but slowed to good, don't know if translater is having problems or it is not being uploaded or if just being stack up then up loaded or is pace is have a problem, some of this stories are like a long race so translaters can have problem over time, so thar is why i give the translation stabity i did even if it is a 5/5 it can change over time.quality it is a 5/5. quality is great i see no problem with it.
Loved the novel, but haven't received updates for around 2 weeks now. Any idea what happened? Novel dropped? Would love to get a reply from the author.
Slave. MC is an actual slave in many ways. The title is more literal than you would think. MC is barely an MC. He is more like a sidekick, We are reading a story form the sidekicks perspective, sure he is a bit devious and special, but in the end he is a slave. Wasted a lot of time reading this in hopes that it improves, in the end, it only gets worse, and MC becomes a bigger slave. The overall quality and everything else is great, too bad that the MC is a bit too pathetic.
