I read all the way up to when the chapters started to get locked and then a couple more with the passes. It's a very good story and I would recommend it, but sadly I refuse to give money to webnovel. If the Author had a Patreon and I could read the chapters that way I would do it but sadly not.
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As far as I can tell this not everyone's cup of tea, but there is certainly an interesting story going on here not to be missed! I hope more will bring this one to the top!
If you have any questions regarding the story I would try and answer them in the replies of this review.Now to the review. It's hard to assess your, own work. I won't give myself all five starts for everything and think that I'm the best. I'm not confident in my writing skill, but I hope that it's on the average level. I won't be able to update the novel frequently and write more than three chapters a week because of my work. Right now this is a hobby. The story development, characters, worldbuilding, all may be unnecessarily slow-paced or written without appropriate attention.Yet I hope that someone would find this story attractive and enjoyable. I don't need powerstones, if you want, you can spend them on a more deserving novel. I don't need hollow five-star reviews that don't describe the novel, but I would appreciate any, review, even one-star. As long as it describes what and where I should change and improve, ups and downs of this story.
this novel is fukin awesome but i know most likely webnovel will not choose this because they always want ****ty cliche and chapters filled with nationalism kind of novel to be translated, FUCK!
Simple, Generic, Quite Fast, Action-packed, and Fun to read. Give it a try before you give it up. If you think it's boring because it seems like a copy, then keep an open mind. I promise it won't disappoint.
Me gusta pero estas mucho tiempo en la realidad en ves de en el juego llevas muchos capítulos y aún no se casi nada del juego ni lo he ara el personaje en el.
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I like that despite the fast pacing of the first few chapters of Mael Growing up, you still keep it realistic. The MC is strong and talented which amazed his parents, but his genius still can't easily beat experience during the coming of age chapters when fighting his father.This is a good story, and there's a lot of chapter which I can spend a lot of time to read during my free time!!
I quite liked it. The Mc is a survivor and was not reborn or was transmigrated. And though the MC does have a system it is an AI, and is limited, and grows. I quite enjoyed it this far, and was a worthwhile read.
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