good story. Need more novels like that..
giving my self a shameless 5 star review just wanna let you guys know that this novel gonna be free for always im more happy to see willingly donation and have more readers i will put patreon link later for your support if you liked this novel , there is about 200 chapter ready but i will just upload 10 each day as we reach there and in 300 chapter this story will end but it will have more than 100 chapter of side stories , wish you a happy ride on reading this novel i put my soul into
Just to make it clear to everyone who is coming into this story, neither I, who am the author, liked the beginning of this story, if you're looking to read a good story, in the beginning, don't read it.That was my first story and the beginning is *a m a t e u r* and even I don't like it, so if you care a lot about grammar and some stupid choices, I don't advise you to read it.MY DISCORD: https://discord.gg/P5JynPh
the story is good, and the MC is hesitating or don't have clear goal but that was before the last two chaptershope don't get dropped before his next reincarnated or how the MC death !overall the story has potential
Okay so. I like the idea of the apocalypse (in story form) but you seriously need to make a better language edit before you post it. The character is good and I see potential so good luck!! And hope to see more chapters from you.
Good stuff right here very engaging from the get go and that's what I like! The world and characterss are well made and the writing is pretty good (as far as I'm concerned)All in all it's a good mystery story, keep it up Author!
Overall it's a great theme and a great story. Seems like it has great potential to be a few hundred chapters long if the author sticks with it. So far the only thing is the grammatical errors but the author said they were working on it so in my opinion it's a great book overall and a recommended read
Ps la historia se ve interesante, Pero los capítulos son muy cortos. Se que es difícil escribir una historia buena pero deberías hacerla un poco más larga
Near chap 50 60 the story become unbelievable. The characters are weird, interaction weirder, everyone in this world is a arrogant - backstaber - young master - dumb grunt - idiot (chose some and mix them you have 99% of the character).And this make the story go bad. The idea of the shop is good but the story dev and charac dev are ruining it.Its honestly tiring to read again and again and again about Im X and Im gonna trash your shop. Oh no I get beaten. Lets call Y and he will trash your shop loop.Plus there is no law system at all it seems ? You can kill people and and be fine with that. Its a bit weird in modern settings, and it doesnt help with the story here because of the huge ammount of murderer/criminal in the world (all except the mc sister so far, so about 99.9%, even if we could say mc is kind of justified)The writing is average. Not bad, not exceptional.Anyways im disapointed in the story. I can t keep reading it.
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Steady pace and great character developments and interaction. The world and realms are kinda confusing. But the tl kinda eased the reading experience.
Actually a very well thought out system novel. MC actually uses his brains.Title: Fearsome farmer/农夫凶猛Rank: 60(quite popular)Status: 570(Ongoing)Author no. of works: 9Also for people who keep reviewing will alter after reading. Go read the f,ucking novel first second you can't even edit reviews so your review is just a spam in end. Why are these people even commenting without reading is this some sort of race to you guys don't you have anything better to do.