CHF is congestive heart failure?
It's an interesting story and theme, i wonder how will the worldbuilding looks like, can't wait for the next chapter!
Good luck for the author!!
Hope this novel could become a hit and continue for a long time!
Hello , i love reading your books, it lacks certain followers and readers, i can help you boost your earnings,
Here are some tips to increase your publication’s profitability.
In my opinion you have a nice idea but poor world background building,no proper foundation was made and it seemed rushed. No detailed explanation on your country's history, not everyone is versed in your country's history?
A unique and interesting book which I would definitely recommend, even though it is dropped. It's writing quality is nearly perfect, albeit there are some random numbers instead of spaces between words also op mc
The story is generic, and the characters are made from cardboard. The MC also seems slow. The "Golden finger" - the System, is almost superfluous, and its exact use is blurred. The grammar is okayish, even with the few errors here and there, but all characters' names are Western. It's strange and breaks immersion to have these kinds of names in an Eastern novel.It might be worth reading for some people, but there are heaps of better stories in the same genre.
Despite a couple of grammatical errors the story is very well-written with a steady flow. The first few chapters are built in a realistic manner with action that is slowly building up. Overall,a very good job and congratulations to the author. Keiep it up.
Aren't you going to continue with this novel? this novel is one of my favorites, do not abandon it :(------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
somehow i dont feel the anti hero vibes on mc. i feel the villain vibes more on the heroes. it feels contradictory tbh. it was nice though but it was a let down that such old man died and mc has no reaction. technically the old man was the first person that made the mc feel warm at least he has been kind. i was expecting more when it says anti hero tag but so be it. 3.4 for now. reason? the writing is average but still better than any novel (4)story development (i really cant feel thr villain vibes although mc is smart) (3)character design (technically, each of their character development is good but not better because mc was quite naive. he easily trust too much despite being bullied all his life (trust me, I'm a victim of bullying and i know pretty much their mindset. they wont trust too much) updating stability is better, good job! (4) as for world background, you did not state what their world was in. why is their heroes and villain and how such powers came to be so it lacks info. btw some of your plots are forced upon mc so it adds up to the rating.
??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I dont know if the othercrackhead who gave this 5-4 stars are a friend of the author or something, but this LN isn't worth half that. While it does take a new route it isn't well thought out at all, which ruins it from the very beginning. Half of it isnt understandable.
are you dropping this author????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????