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I bet you can tell from the synopsis this would be a good storyBut wait until you read the first chapter, you'd be shocked at what you'll find!A GOOD BOOK!The description, the development, everything is just perfect!I love this book and I recommend it to everyone who wants to readGood job author?
I like friendship stories, but this work is at the next level! I like how the author draws the background world so neatly and i like the Japanese culture in the very beginning chapters. The action and the thrill make it even more challenging to read! just some input from me.. i think the author may watch the punctuation and the space between one to another person dialogue so it would be neater. But for the rest of that is good! Nice story to read!
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Your Pace with the story if to fast pace
I like this novel that MC try to save his sister, instead his need to save the mankind . So, I am hopping to get more chapters from this book. I enjoy reading this type of books,So, please.
... Why Fut@? Like I know people have their things but just... why? completely ruined the story for me but that's just me
Truly one of the great novels on this, or any, web novel style site. Piokilek’s mastery of weaving a deep and meaningful story with well developed characters is a tribute to his abilities as an up and coming professional novelist. This was my first experience with his writing style, and I can state with confidence that each of his other novels are as well developed as this story.If you like harem novels with a great cast of characters, or are searching for a story with a developed plot and a steady flow, you should read this story about Xuefeng and his strong and beautiful women. The story grabs you and pulls your heartstrings from the very beginning.
As the first reviewer it's my responsibility to tell all of you that it is a "SYSTEM" NOVEL!!!!!!*coughs proudly in front of mere mortals who will never get a system in their life**Bows*
RIP killerhemboy. I was holding off finishing this story cause I didn't want to reach an unfinished end. It was a great story, but idk if it'll ever get finished if the author is actually dead.
Ame esta historia desde el primer capítulo, lo recomiendo al 100%. Me gusto como se fue desarrollando el trama, cada capítulo es fascinante. :) :) :) :)
I was kinda enjoying the novel when Wutian—the Protagonist—was living in the woods, nursing a desire for revenge and having fun with Little Tian, his slimy faux toad. Bringing the little girl into the story was a mistake. Bringing her along was a mistake. The MC's total inability to keep a low profile has began to be a big drag…Still, I will continue to read on for at least a while longer—to see how things turn out...