Frequency420
Basically, another one of those simulation novels. Except that each life is identical to the previous one, making it more of a time loop. So that's somewhat original. Other than that, the story is just as lacking in plot, character development, and quality as every other simulation novel.
In fact, for now I like the novel ... In short, it lacks a bit of grammar and has some errors (not as much as others I've seen, MY EYES ARE LOST ALMOST!) I think if you fix it and focus a little more outside the MC, also if you post more often haha all great (even if the latter is not necessary) thanks and excellent work.
It was thrilling and exciting. It has a good development in any scene and a funny system that compressed the life force of mc making him brave for his life. It is a good story. Hope it pass a trial from the judge ahaha.
Hello Author, here is my review for you. Writing Quality - So far i have come to like the way that you write your novel, and there does not seem to be a lot of grammatical issues, which is actually quite a rare thing to see in new novels. Perhaps you have some previous experience writing? Either way, I think you earned the 5 stars I have given you on this area. Stability of Updates - Obviously 5 stars if you manage to keep up what you have promised. I would not want you to go as far as to release 25 chapters a week though, unless you really believe that you will be able to handle it without ruining the story. Story Development - I will have to give this 3 stars at the moment as the story is only 7 chapters so far. I will change this based on what happens to the story in the future. Character Design - I will leave this at 3 stars as well at the moment due to the ****** fact that we have not received a lot of information about our MC. It would be nice to get a prologue that somewhat explains how the life of our MC was before he was reincarnated into a skeleton. This rating will be changed as well once you have a few more chapters out. World Background - Will keep this at 4 stars, although it is quite like the "Character Design" and "Story Development". We are still missing quite a lot of information regarding the world that he is in and the world he came from. For all I know he could have been an alien in his past life.
Pretty boring so far. Nothing really makes it stand out. Translation seems ok, nothing great, nothing horrible. The writing style seems ho-hum and doesn't really inspire much immersion. I don't know if this is the translator or just an issue with the source material.
Look what a great title..I hope this novel great as title..cause from synopsis I feel this novel is normal as water..but look who translation this novel...you know what to do??Vote!!!!Vote!!!!Vote!!!Vote!!!4 bro endless!!
The book is great no doubt It, the idea Is awesomeWorld background excellentOne problem the Author Nerfed the mc for no apparent reason for 100 chapter. He turned something with great potential to something turning trashy with an mc that's always the underdog like we've no seen this before.
I almost died trying to read through waves of useless descriptions and confusing overly elborate great walls of text. As some people commented, even gods will have trouble reading through this.
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Guys I checked out the CN site, the novel is highly recommended and is rated more highly than Ze Tian Ji, the author's most popular work among the Translation community. I suppose this is a novel worth your precious votes.
This entire story is amazing. The only issue is that I read so much that I end up with nothing to read. This is one of those books that I could read and then get upset that I read it all.
