An interesting story ,,but there is need to develop the character of the protagonist ,as Alex being a second gen hier of Ambrose family -the family which influences the whole world so I think u need to develop the Alex character more ,,AND A HUGE REQUEST PLZZ MAKE ALEX MEET DEBBIE SOON
it's fun to read and looking forward to finished reading this novel.
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This is my experience good,good,good then bamm 115 comes and kick my ball but it is still working,then again ball 130~ bam the ball is crushed into pasted and am dying and death.
I''m already on Ch 124, and I can confidently say that this novel is very much worth one's time. Reincarnation-themed novels might be typical here in webnovel but the author adds his/her own twists which made the novel unique. I easily get bored so it's common for me to suddenly drop a novel anytime but for this one, each chapter is interesting and made me always anticipate for what's to come next. As for the other relevant characters, they are all likeable and are given "life" (in a sense that they didn't seem like canon-fodders or just 2d characters). The MC's relationship/interaction/dynamics with his friends is really cute and interesting haha?It is also updated regularly and props to the author for being so nice and inclusive to his/her readers! Much love? P.S. sorry dear author for I still don't know if you're a he or a she?
a trash novel , people voting for nonsensical attitude ,basically no translators and qidian just pops everything they want to make money .
Why do I feel like I have read almost similar synopsis in some other novel too?Please confirm my guess! P.S. I have yet to read this, so 4 star(benefit of doubt).
Hi guys,I really appreciate the fantasy world the author has created...you really refine the finer details about the world you are talking about and it's pretty easily picturised in my mind...hope you keep us posted with more chapters...it's a good book to chill with..?
This story has really started to grow on me, although I do admit to struggling with it quite a bit. I think it was the pacing at first, as the story seemed to promise a slow upward trend instead of something fast and exciting. In any case the story is about a guy in his 20's throwing himself into the deep end alongside a mysterious system that has dedicated itself to improving his cooking to the peak.I tend to judge a story based on its faults rather than its pro's, so that's what I've decided to focus on for this review. However, I hope readers realize that this is without context and however damning it might seem, my issues might not necessarily be issues for you. 1. The story can get very repetitive. After you've read 50 chapters or so you'll start to notice the same thing happening over and over again. Cooking for his customers, getting a mission, getting the reward and introducing it to the customers, then rinse and repeat a few dozen times. The food he cooks does change with time as well as the faces visiting his shop. It keeps things a little fresher, but I really don't suggest reading the story in large chunks like I did because the repetition becomes very apparent. More missions would likely have helped with this I think.2. The author likes to surround his MC with the aura of a mysterious and elevated figure. That's usually something that's fun to read, but in this story that's the role the MC plays when in the company of other characters(Which is almost literally every chapter so far). What ended up happening is the MC stopped being a person in my mind and became someone else's... Wish fulfillment? Their Gary Stu? I've read 129 chapters but have yet to see the MC experience a single loss worth mentioning :/3. The freaken aliens man... I was promised aliens... That's what really got me to this point, the promise that eventually this story is supposed to reach towards the stars and go galactic. My curiosity keeps demanding I read on, but the logic portion of my mind is telling me it could take a year before the translation reaches that point. Well, the logic portion is also suggesting I've been lied too because I haven't seen anyone else talking about it, but that could just be because it's all written in another language right? Help please? :(Regardless of whether or not you're interested in the premise or just want to kill some time, this story is a decent read despite its flaws. So give it a shot and maybe you'll like it.
my brain hurts reading this.. . . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
th complain I have is related to the mc he is very arrogant in situations that could be resolved peacefully like in the end of ch 25 and ch 26 when he was asked about who he is and he didn’t respond he just escalated the problem further and prolonged it instead but i see the mc as a baby who got a new toy and got addictedto it as for those who see this novel as brother and sister love, let me tell you that it's not , they are not his actual sisters they are from different families, so read first before commenting mindlessly .
Good story but the author hates the USA and it shows the US Navy let pirates raid a cruise ship they are suppose to be the greatest Navy (mc just attacked and sank a us sub so withdrew their ships to search the area), the USA is interfering in Africa because want the resources but +mc invades and makes his own country)