"Ah, no," said Ellen, "I shall let him do it, and then you cannot tell upon me."
Author you speak like....this which is... very annoying to even... read.....Don't get me.. started on the other parts...Example.. can't understand.. what anyone.. is saying or person..speaking..
Hello, Secret_Ethereal here,A supportive readers and a fellow author. Please keep your hard work. I'm a good judge of book and I could see your book has a potential in the future. Cheer up and don't lose your interest in writing just because you still not find the right person to appreciate your masterpiece. I'm rooting for a new chapter.
Would not reccomend, the author slapped the villain tag in there for 0 reason the mc is as heroic as you can find, justifies every action and and the whole schtick anyway I would beacon the author to remove the villain tag as it is false advertisement and leads to disappointed viewers and this is review is soley for other readers to enjoy villain mc novels ti read not to announce my departure to the auhtor and he should in no way be dissapointed that he lost a reader I just want to request the author drop the villain tag as I was highly dissapointed and don’t want others to feel the same
Couldn't get past the first 30 chapters because of how cringey it is and how uncomfortable it makes me.
So far I’m enjoying the story, but I can’t recall what most of the characters look like as there are so many introduced at once. Could you write a list of all important characters, their physical appearance, and a brief synopsis of who they are in relation to the story?Also it might help if you use the characters physical appearance to describe them briefly after you’ve initially introduced them. To clarify this is after you described their appearance. So writing something like, “The pink haired girl, lily, asked”. Not saying this better than what your doing but it might be something too consider.
The story is a great story filled with strong romance and love. Hatred , betrayal and fighting for love ones these are also other interesting facts about the story. A cold master suddenly stuck in love and ready to protein his little spoilt wife but enemies lurks around ready to destroy their love , where a girl has to start learning more about her true self and also falls in love with a man she never imagine she would ever love. How far can she go protecting her love and family
kind of detail heavy but it's pretty good so far! Could probably work on your pacing a little.
I actually quite enjoy reading this book I don’t know how it isn’t contract yet just continue to upload and I’ll continue to support you
i will like to help you on how to improve your book performance publications profitability but am not sure if you on any social media platform to discuss further
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