Dropped?………….or a break, why did you stop releasing chapters in all your novels all of a sudden
I read the first 10 chapters and can I just say that I want to adopt Hannah as my little sister. She is just the cutest thing ever. I also like Jason and the fact that he is willing to enter a tournament which could potentilally harm him just so he can provide for his mother and sister. I find that really selfless and admirable. The writing quality could use a bit of work as there are some errors here and there, but not so much that it affects the story. Overall, great writing style, pace, and characters. Keep up the good work!
this story has nothing to do with his reading skills, learning capabilities or his smarts. it a wish fulfillment, slice of life, semi-smut like all others of it's kind.
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It's only the first chapter and I am already amazed with the writing style and story flow. Awesome work for a zombie apocalypse themed story!There may be a bit of problem with the separation of the paragraph and dialogues which makes it a bit confusing.Great job so far!
The story is developing will although the author is not consistent with regular updating of the story. The story is developing well and has potential to become even better
can't wait for this to drop, I had a blast reading this. I hope it gets picked up and not another novel about magic or another romance novel.
I love this book overall as a whole. Really I like all of the characters except one. the main female they made her too stupid. She really took the whole "dumb blonde" to heart. other than that I love the book. wish that we could get another book in the same universe. Maybe something with Samuel maybe five hundred or a thousand years later or something that would be awesome.
What can I say except intriguing. The title pulls you in by forcing you to ask questions. I like how you gave us a little foreshadowing near the end of the third chapter. What exactly is the third regression I'm on my toes?
This a good book let's support the author. please comment like and share and vote guys the author is doing so much for free its time to show our gratitude
(3542 Chapters in)TLDR: Do yourself a favor, read till the War arc, then quit. it only gets worseAfter 3500 chapter of reading this novel, the only thing i can express is disappointment and frustration. The first few hundred chapters are rough, but they had promise and the premise of “the system” made sense. The MC progressed at a reasonable pace, that is until the infamous “War” arc. this is where the entire story begins to go downhill. See, The Mech touch ‘was’ as system novel up until the war arc. At the beginning of this arc he is forced to put away his system and you dont see it for nearly a hundred chapters. I believe this is where the author got the idea to start phasing out the system, because even after the war arc he begins to use the system less and less, supposedly to not ‘become over reliant’. yknow, reliant on the one thing that is the entire reason that he isnt rotting in obscurity in the first place. The second he stops relying on the system, his progress grinds to a halt, in the 2000+ chapters since, he has had minute and intangeble progress with no signs of true progression. Now all that is pretry damning for what was supposed to be a system novel, reimagining your system novel into something that is decidedly not is a bold move, one which i think didnt turn out well. however, this wasn’t even the worst mistake that the author made. no, the single worst mistake that the author made can be summed up by one name, gloriana. Up until the moment ves met this girl, he was a calculating man who, while not being abrasively masculine or overbearing, still stood up for himself. Once gloriana was introduced he was dragged along like a dead fish, by the most unlikable female lead ive ever read about. This female supremacist, ultra religious, man hating, obsessive-compulsive woman is the single most annoying character in existence. her constant harrassment and dismissal of the MC is absolutely ludicrous and it is further compounded by the fact that the MC just lets her walk all over him on countless occassions. The authors choice to include a female lead who no one could ever possibly like is confounding, and is the single biggest reason that ive quit reading this novel DOZENS of times, to the point that the only reason i come back to this book is because im alread 3500 chapters in
I see that you choose Zero from Drakengard 3 for the cover, which is one of my favorite game… This is why I will read your story aha