First of all, the English was good. Based on the first chapter I can say that it was well-defined, but if I wasn't mistaken there were some quotation marks that weren't inserted right in the dialogue. I hope it will improve. Keep writing!?
WHY IS THIS BOOK CHOSEN AGAIN ???? ANGRY ANGRY ANGRY ANGRY ANGRY ANGRY ANGRY ANGRY ANGRY ANGRY ??????????????????????
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Slow Very Slow.... Seriously 16chaps and still not bought the land??????just got tired of reading it.....................…....................
Its been almost a year since i have read this so I have migh have forgetten some stuff.......But I think it was a pretty okay.Good for passing time..
I hate the Female lead Anya. Shes a *****, She always get MC into trouble, Fuck her. Everything is great except the female lead. But why do you have the "System" Tag? I dont see any system even in chap 12. Why so late to intruduce cheat? Cheats should be intruduced in first chapters
?? MAGNIFICENT!!! THE COMEDY, THE HILARIOUS UNDERLYING PEDO JOKES, THE TSUNDERE YUNA, THE HOT ICE MOM?, THE ANIME TYPE PROTAGONIST GUY WHO EXPERIENCES LUCKY PERVERTED SITUATIONS ??????? ¡Muy magnifico, Muy Bueno! It's a must read. all the scenes were painted so well not to mention the Yuna's mom... WOULD SMASH!??? If you don't agree after reading the scene towards the end then you can catch these hands RESPECTFULLY ? I personally recommend using the audio feature on this one while washing plates or some other chore and listen to it. Well done on the author's end, they really did well on the Grammar, punctuations, tenses and dialogue. btw did I mention that the humour is A-1?? Just read it, trust me. Ps. if you Yuna and the narrator don't get married and have children I'm staring a riot ?