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There's no shapeshifting. This is actually a story of a male protagonist's every action being praised and revered by a group of rabid female fans. The rabid fans take his every word as gospel. They organise lynch mobs against anyone who dares talk ill of the protagonist. And of course, all the fans are incredibly beautiful, from powerful backgrounds, or have something else about that that's incredible. Surely there's other ways of stroking one's ego than reading this. This author must have a massive inferiority complex.
sentient system that follows cliche path of being a jerk to the mc in hopes to create comedy to entertain the reader but never does because it's lazy writing that offers nothing to the story and detracts from what anyone who clicked on this truly want which is a novel focused on the building of a sect with the help of a system.
This was a disappointing read, throughout the entire story, the MC, Miles, literally has no character development, and he makes dumb choices that either injure his pets and himself, for example, besides the beginning, he does not ever use his Attractiveness Value again, if he would just use it, so many problems could have been avoided, he is literally refusing to use his Golden Finger/his cheat. There are so many useful things he could've done with his system that he just ignores. And the villains, side characters, love interests are all as generic as they come, the villains are a group of people that he somehow offends and manages to encounter every time. The side characters are mostly all arrogant, constantly changing sides whenever someone says something dumb about the MC, the love interests are overall annoying as usual, constantly hindering the MC's development. Lastly, he always causes the problem that he puts himself in, and honestly, I could go on and on, but overall, just a bad read, slightly decent in the beginning, but just continues to degrade as the story continues since the Author obviously has no idea what to do next.
Heads up. I read the raws and I should've seen it coming and I did. Hints of racism and nationalism are there even though the country isn't called China even in this translated version but like all it's peers and predecessors this novel gets DISGUSTING real quick. Read at your own risk. What a waste it was so good too.
Knew from the start I am following and wld keep following cos like I said ure a star in eyes well done wish u could be alot fast but I understand,with ur exams on the way and all other stuff
Ótimo romance história muito boa e personagens bons também só precisa melhorar a velocidade de atualização de capítulos estou querendo mais continue com o ótimo trabalho.
The leaves are part of the plant's respiration process, they fall off and decay quickly. Did anyone else think this plot escalated too fast? Looks like someone took forty pages and boiled it down to four.
hey author-sama, did the harem start, and if yes wt is the size
The grammar is consistently bad but not to the point where you can't understand what's happening. The premise of the story is interesting and it definitely deserves more attention.
This story has a very interesting narrative approach that allows the reader to delve into the life of Di Tou, a young man who considers his life boring and unremarkable. The writing is clear and effective, which makes it easy to immerse oneself in the story. The author's skill lies in his ability to take the reader through Di Tou's routine, making the story feel realistic and believable. A great job, it kept me entertained!
As we approach our 100th chapter, I'd like to share my review of the story so far. While I acknowledge that it may not be a perfect 5-star rating, I firmly believe that the story I aim to tell is worth the rating I've given it.Admittedly, the progression can be a bit slow, and there are moments when the MC's actions may seem unintelligent or lazy.However, I urge readers to stick with the story until at least the 50th chapter before making any final judgments and dropping hateful comments.If, after giving it a fair chance until 50 chapters, the story still doesn't resonate with you... Then I can always see you in my next story.If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to ask in the comments, and I'll do my best to address them.Regarding some common criticisms from a few readers:The MC may appear lazy or unproductive at times, but this is due to the lack of available resources that he can use at the current point in the plot. However, he gradually becomes more proactive as the story unfolds.The MC is not a weak or pathetic (he does act like it in the start but don't be fooled), and I can only ask that you read further to see how his character develops.The pacing of the story may be a bit slow in the beginning, (too much monologues) but it does pick up as the plot progresses.