He isn't strong from the start. It's a mistake
Here it shows 946 where is the rest........can you share the link??
I bet that little spirit killed him, what a yandere. Or it could be one of those kill the family member to succeed kinda schemes.~Chapter 1
I cant Imagine how the "Devouring and Vomiting Root" looks... is it a snake like a root?
This novel has a potential, only that it gives one a headache trying figure out the flow of the story. The pronouns are often used interchangeably.
I like stories like this I wish there was more this is amazing but the chapter updates for me are too slow and as there aren’t any other novels like this and the other novels I’m currently reading also have slow updates I have to wait quite a while, there’ nothing that entertains me anymore I’ve read everything on and off of Webnovel but yeah this is a good novel please increase chapter releases
do give it a try......do give it a try......do give it a try......do give it a try......do give it a try......
Writing Quality: A decent amount of grammar errors but understandable. Story is good enough to overlookStability: Seems fineStory: Very interesting so far and uniqueDesign: Kid is cute and hopefully spelling mc donalds on the first chapter wrong was how the kid pronounced it because it was funny and cuteBackground: not sure yet
I know that the setting is like Nano Machine but he doesn't actually have a system, its just that he got the abilities from an A.I and has super perception type stuff, its not as overpowered as it seems and its actually really entertaining.The world building and martial arts are extremely similar to Super Gene, besides the other world part of it, the technology and the way humanity is across the galaxy is similar, and the martial arts of super gene are easily some of my favorite in the way its portrayed and explained out of most of any of the novels I've read, this definitely has the potential to be one of the greatest novels on this site I highly recommend.There are a few typos or confusion of if something "is" or "is not" but it happens like once every third or fourth chapter and is very ignorable, no nationalism or anything, I really hope this one gets picked up.
This novel is different n refreshing, the female lead is different from the usual stereotypes of fl, and until now (ch 40) we still didn't know who's the ML, I just hope this is a reverse harem novel ? but sadly this kind of novel only have a minority fans ? I really hope this one will continue to update ?
This book can be summed up in two words: wasted potential. You can feel that the author has a feel for the world he created and its background, but the info dump makes the story unreadable. Instead of discovering the world at the same time as the main character, we get random chapters of info dump about something completely unrelated. Even action scenes full of tension are simply cut to make place for an explanation of the background of a random dead race or character that you won’t give a f about in a couple chapters. Yeah, so I tried to keep going and to hope that the info dump would stop at some point to focus on the story, but it hasn’t. So try it out if you don’t mind a slow paced story that doesnt follow a linear pespective.
Super op with undeveloped plot and world background, a very wish fulfilling novel that make no sense.... The potential of this novel is very limited there is no fight sense and nothing worthy to drive you to read more chapters...