Nice work dude, keep it up. I'm also new here so let's support each other. Keep going.
Nice Story so far but, keep it up and good job
Nice Story so far but, keep it up and good job
Nice Story so far but, keep it up and good job
Nice Story so far but, keep it up and good job
Drop more Chapters Man cmon more chapters cant be doing this bro
This is the shameless author review I saw everyone doing
Before I read this novel, I had a house, wife and two kids. These things are gone now, but the novel’s pretty good. 10/10 would recommend if you respire aerobically. (btw, if any of you have seen my wife tell her not to come back)
Nice story interesting plot. Waiting for more chapters. Keep up your good work author
Honestly poor grammar/english and over use of the world "mam" really dont understand why. World building so far and character introductions are poor
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Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
It must feel great to ruin your own work with NTR..
The writing, grammar wise, is fairly terrible. It’s all in passive voice, so everything sounds funny. It makes it less enjoyable to read. Honestly it seems to be on purpose to make the word coung longer. Even if English isn’t your first language, you have to actively try to sound like Yoda all the time. I think the wrong tense choice is also because of everything being in passive voice. Grammar aside, the story is wonderful thus far. Interesting magic system and world development. It’s not one size fits all, you have X tiers of power with X subtiers. It seems different enough to stick out, but not unnecessarily complicated just to be different.
Amazing story so far, keep up the good work. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .