"I invited BingCha and XuKe," Jasper added, mentioning their friends from elementary school. "Plus, I already told your parents."
Dimple stared at him, flabbergasted. She was annoyed at how he could just barge in on her perfect Saturday afternoon and make such inane demands; she didn't know what to say.
Another change worth noting is that the MC has a proper name now Clive Adkins
"Thornson. I believe this has just gotten political. Which means it's no longer our department.
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Saito: "Well that should be helpful in case you need it.Take care. I hope this will protect them even after I'm gone."
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he was the son of the lupacho the super strong human among gods
New book, please support. Do keep in mind that this is an African inspired book that is entirely fictional .. .. .
Great novel, Paced debauchery, Story development is great so far definitely slow paced but reasonable for this story considering the type. I like the world build and the fact that a lot is unexplored at the moment leaving much to the imagination for future endeavors for out MC. All in All great story fingers crossed for a game/real world merge. ?
First off this is really well written. Writing about MOBA's can get tricky because you risk a massive info dump, but I think the author has done a great job of it while keeping it interesting. I like the character types, but I feel they are too rigid in their archetype, I would have liked a little more gray and less black/white. Still that is fine and the archetype for the mc is particularly interesting. My real problem with the characters is their age vs how they behave/talk, they definitely behave/talk above their age.I hope the author continues doing such a good job and we get to see a really good coming of age story.