man when I saw that it was cancelled I was very sad, but now it's back and once again I highly recommend you give this a try, I love everything, the fights, the dialogue, the characters, and the occasional detailed parts.in summary read it, it good, yes
Bad spelling, cringy and the system does everything the mc asks without restrictions or requirements. MC is like a kid...........,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,..................
Had good potential, unfortunately it is in the we novel trash bag now. Hope it continues updating tbh though...DO NOT READ IF THERE ARE ONLY 40 CHAPTERS POSTED AS IT IS GIVEN UP ON.
Another novel promoting Social Credit System that is currently being implemented all over the world. We getting world update on population control boiiiis.
The story is good! I scored it 5 for every point because it is just simply good!The story and characters are nice, the broken speech of the younger sister is interesting!So is the way the antagonist olots against him.I wonder why you don't have more interest - probably because there's no hook or really cool thing to catch a reader in the title, synopsis or first chapter?Maybe put 2-3 paragraphs of AFTER he has gained power at the start? Then flashback to the start of the story?
This novel is just as good as your other ones, just a slower start which is probably why its not as popular. However I hope you keep updating it!!!!
This is a good story, with good development and world background. But i think it needs an editor. this story can be evolved to like monster paradise if author want it. Just give it a personal touch It's nearly three weeks and still no sign of coming back. NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!
truly perfect. its early but the genre is my favorite. since i cant edit my last review, here comes a new one. the writing quality is splendid with non existing errors. the grammar, spelling and words are choosen brilliantly and this makes it easy, fast and enjoing to read. better than some translators with records over the 1000th.about the update stability isnt much to say since its written and not translated. but damn its fast. two new chaps in the last 4-5 hours? great man, keep up the nice work.story development can be said as fast paced, but its logical and linear which avoids a feeling of rushing to the end and also repeated to just fillnup the chapters. the result is just a perfect and constant flow forward.the character backround isnt truly deep, but who wants 10 chapters only to get known the character. every character got introduced so that they feel unique and easy to remember. here you see the formidable work of the author. he can display the character of the mc perfektly in the minimum words used during the progress of the story which greatly showws the value between a writer and a splendid author. He got it!In the world background the author gets it too perfectly balanced between enough to get the feeling of the world but not too much to say this store got one brick few than the store neighbouring? The story itself is about a midage with problems getting a system to overcome them and go on, go on , go on .... spoiler spoiler spoiler...so this is one of the few novels on the net who deserve a perfect score 5/5. well done and keep up author. if u dont break up i will read till the end.
The translation is a bit iffy, words change every few chapters. But, the whole novel is centred around comedy. The system and the levelling up is not the focus of this novel, if you were looking for some system focused novel, then this is not for you. The hilarious scenarios and the weird aspect is what got me hooked. If you just ignore the system words that change every now and then, it's a good comedy novel.
Why is LITERALLY EVERY CHAPTER a information dump on things that don't make sense or we don't even need to know. I'm on Chap 19 and the mc is still in training to get his class. I recently started skipping the information dump paragraphs and realized that there is only 2-3 paragraphs in every chapter where the story actually progresses...wtf
The potential of this story is incredible, I hope the author with the excellent work. Author, I understand that character development is necessary, but don't take too long because it gets frustrating after a while
Can't give a very well constructed opinion because the editor (if there is any) is garbage and I abandoned the novel at 10th chapter. If there is in 1 chapter few paragraphs from the middle also at the end and then next chapters are put up in incorrect order and remains unchanged event when ppl point it out in comments. Sorry but I won't suffer through it. Liked the story until this point tho