KiritoSenpai9138
havn't read but bluring out the year with XXXX just means the time this took place was between 1000 to 9999 on a calander although it alot it narrows down the time frame this story occured?
nice story to read this is the series of horror story which can be read very quietly its really a nice story to read lets enjoy this story as
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the male lead is so likable and hard working. i am really interested in the plot development . this story has a lot of potential. the author has done an awesome job of keeping it clear and lively so far. waiting for more chapters.
It has close to no grammatical errors except for a few spelling mistakes. It's a nice take on the quirkless world of mha but nothing new. Though it does have the potential to be a great fanfic. Just try not make the MC too overpowered too early. The pace at which you're going is just right. Great work and please don't drop the fanfic.
it’s meh to say the least. man eats = grows stronger = becomes a great martial master in the matter of what 3 days (if i aint wrong; martial warrior —> martial master —> great martial master —> grand master —> great grand master. i think) yeh previously man was a grade 1 martial warrior then becomes a great martial master which is super fast. won’t be surprised if some dude with common sense comes to kill him for his secrets. only good point is that the dude is 90 years old and has a wife and son n daughter. but so far barely any interaction with them just face slapping. like i swear if the author focuses more on his family then just face slapping it would be a more entertaining novel. but their chinese so rip it is what it is
The novel translation is back! what a good news! I hope this well stay until the chapter end! Please help support this novel so that it well stay being translated.
don't read this even if the story is good the translator is only copy pasting ML stuff after chap 40.the chapters are not being translated at all and we are being charged an average of 13 coins per chap
This novel is absolutely fantastic with a total of 3k chapters. So far I have read till 1.8k chapters and am still hooked. Its not just about martial arts but how the martial arts system is constantly refined to become better. Only issue is the machine translation which makes it difficult to read.Is there a way where random people can edit the chapters that are translated with machine?
It good read for all to see the story
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Story straight up makes no sense. Author clearly does not know what story passing and proper development is, and cannot properly narrate the story as their is a lack of explanation for the plot. Simply put only the author would truly understand the story, since whatever the story is only fully narrated in his head. Overall: Garbage tier writing/execution.
