KiritoSenpai9138
nice story
I love it
I liked the story line but overall, some areas fell flat. The same thoughts and lines are repeated frequently. The lead female is incredibly dull, not to mention weak so it's hard to buy into her. Especially since it's narrated that she is fierce - but she's not. No steamy scenes FYI.
Amazing Story!! Love it ...️
From past few chapters it shows hardly any progress. Only everyone’s inner thoughts are going on and on. I like your writing but this. Sometime I even forget what was the previous dialogue to connect with the next one. Because both have 5-6 pages of inner thoughts.
I’ve read all of this book in one sitting. It’s so good! I need to know how it continues!
This is the first book I have read here in this platform and I must say...this is a masterpiece.
What a great book .
I have read it over and over and i found it very catching , keep up with the great work author,??
Another book worth reading! I'm still over the edge with all the fighting scenes and can't wait to know how this story will end!
I’m hoping this is not the end of this story.if so I’m not very happy with it
next book next book me too me too
Great story
Lets see what this novel brings
