Ch-223What a sassy lil xiaomomo!!! 33 That alien deserves it HaahHAH Go! be! bad! ass!
This is an interesting read as a Jojo fan, but I have some things I'd like to point out.The author doesn't seem to understand the powers of of a few Stands at all! 1st) Author seems to think Crazy Diamond is limited to only fixing inanimate objects when Crazy Diamond fixes EVERYTHING other than its owner + it can't bring the dead back to life. Other than that, Crazy Diamond is an absolutely broken OP Stand. Author wasted so many The World Over Heaven's Reality Overwrite ability to heal others when he could have just used Crazy Diamond to heal them, and save the Reality Overwrite abilities of The World Over Heaven on himself.2nd) God Anubis is a Stand that possessed a sword. It has the ability to PHASE through inanimate objects to strike at the target. Which means blocking or hiding behind something is useless against Anubis. Author had many weapon clashes against many enemies using Anubis when he could in fact one shot someone by phasing Anubis through their weapons and killing them.3rd) Emperor is a Stand by itself. It DOESN'T need to possess a gun or a medium to be used. The gun itself is the Stand! Along with its bullets! The Stand that needs a medium to be used is Sex Pistols used by Mista in Vento Aureo, and it works by having the little Stands alter the bullet's trajectory by bouncing it around. Technically speaking, if he used Crazy Diamond, he could keep restoring the same bullet over and over without the need to reload or to purchase new bullets, making it a super OP combination. If he combined Killer Queen's ability and turn the bullet into bombs, it will be even more terrifying.
I finding it hard to understand when they are talking about the other people on He'll difficulty if they are talking about the assassin type kid or the female archer that uses magic
Why are their no comments? This is a remarkable story
Pei ge is really an idiot ..u know y? Of all the thing that ziming done 4 her ..she choose to believe that bitch without 2nd thought..and it's very common and I already read many stories like this..she goes to other country change herself ..and avenge..such a lame story ..I don't want to read it anymore..I'm just getting pissed
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Honestly, this is rather bad. The author just lists events one after another without creating any immersion, the dialogue is the equivalent of two ai conversing as the characters feel more like NPCs, the world-building is ridiculous with stuff like mc gaining the eternal mangekyou sharingan within the first 5 chapters, despite it being unknown to everyone in this world, we don`t know the era or even what the mc is trying to accomplish, and the grammar is not far from MTL in terms of quality, which is quite the achievement. The story has potential, but the author should seriously plan out what they want to write and edit their work.
The start is impressive. The flow seemed good and the conversation also paced well. The author did a good job in giving explanations wherever necessary and the writing quality is also good. Keep up the good work author
a Playboy returns to monkey after death and strives to be awesome but turns into God, in other words return to monkey to become God. sounds good to me man
This novel is amazing even though it has a goofy title(but I like it). Well then, first of all, the grammar is spot on. The stability of updates considering he has college is really impressive. The story developing at a stable pace not too fast not too slow. The character designs are good. The world is vast and yeah, that's pretty much it.
A Godly author once again descended, giving us the real manuscript. I hope the author will realease 5 or more chapters a day to satisfy our cravings. Bless us Godly Author-sama.
the beginning was great but becomes long-winded, lost focus on the main character and while reading our mind starts wandering instead of focusing on the plot