ViadhivanRanatao7L
Same clinche poor Mc's family, struggling mc and his sister. Mc tries to give his sister a good life. But I got enough with it.The starting of the story is so boring. You could have cut that part but you still made the tragic story that was not logical for me.Sorry, I don't want to know further.
5 stars for the God Level cover. It is by far the most brilliant illustration that I have ever seen in this platform.-Artistic level 1000-Genius Artist 1000-Divine Hands of an Art God 1000Overall Score 1000
I'm not good with praise so all I can say is this is a really good novel. It's so refreshing to see such good grammar on this website. The story and world background seem good so far. I can only hope the author doesn't drop or slow down in updates.
I would recommend this novel to Post Malone, Tekashi Sixnine, Lil Pump and the Gucci Gang. I would love to one day see a gangsta wuxia novel with Blacks.
Everything is good until they(webnovel) change translator from EndlessFantasy to someone who use translate machine to translate this novel at chapter 40 and so onThing get worst to the point that you do not feel enjoy reading this novel any more. This is completely translated from translate machine even translator from MTL could do better that this
This "you know" writing style is not good. The story lacks of excitement cause the spoiler in the early chapters ruin it all, it was as if the MC is destined to stand at the peak no matter what tragedy befall the MC.
'Shirtless men drove water buffaloes to plow the land, their shouts piercing the sky, audible from far away.' I have to talk about the sensory details in this text because the author is doing something special with worldbuilding. This isn't just '1970s China backdrop' — it's lived-in. The bamboo fence that makes it 'impossible for passersby to see inside without standing on tiptoe.' The faded red couplets from New Year still on the wooden pillars. The sour jujube tree in the corner with 'fewer [flower buds] in number than those already fallen on the ground.' These details aren't decorative; they're atmospheric. They tell you about this family's place in the village, about the passage of time, about scarcity and care all at once. The hospital ward scene is equally vivid. The curtain between beds, the crying child Dongdong, Zhao Chunrong simmering chicken soup before dawn, the smell of malted milk that's 'overly sweet.' You can smell this place. You can hear it. And the contrast between the sterile hospital stairwell — unlit, with that small window casting shifting shadows — and the sun-dappled courtyard back home? That's cinematic. The author isn't just describing settings; they're using light and space to mirror emotional states. The tractor ride itself is a whole world in miniature: the ginger trick, the roadside recovery, the pale faces of mother and daughter against the green rice paddies. This is a story that knows how to make you feel the dust and the heat and the exhaustion.
I Find It annoying that the story isn't the one I was expecting but getting past all that. The novel was pretty good. I like the mc and the world I think was done fairly well. The author described the everything but didn't flood rhe story with too much info to the point you just want to skip everything. The story is also pretty fast pace to the point it will skip by months which I like because day by day can be pretty boring and if you build a world or story then a lot is expected to happen so you don't want to be too slow with your story or it will take too long to get anywhere.
this seems good keep it up author
Ummmmm....So, Sanidhya GoswamiI look upon you as somewhat of a dignified person(only in terms of your writing, warna I know tu kitna bade wala hai)Keep going? you're gonna rock the world with your stories:Best wishes,From:Zo
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One of the best writers on webnovel decides to make a novel about apocalypse and includes the same new concept of system from his previous novel ,I Hate Systems. There's no way it will be bad ! Read all the chapters already and can't wait for moreeeee
