It’s a good readI’ll advice you shorten the paragraphs a bitBut other than that, It’s really good?
I like the story, but I’m gonna have to stop reading after he ate the innocent nice guy, the fact that he just straight up almost murders a passed out drunk guy for no reason also adds to it. It’s just not my cup of tea (I read it when it was limited free, so that might affect my opinion since I didn’t have to pay for it) (I read up to Chp 76)
man author, even with the obvious flaws and mix emotions moments continuesly to show on early to mid chapters i still enjoy it. but the sudden change of mind of tang and you making him soft realy break his real character. i think you want this as his character development but man I didn't suit him at all. I didn't even suit the atmosphere of this novel. he should be domineering and ruthless to his enemy not the otherway around. such a disappointment. imight drop this soon it was a great ride man but the early thousands chap development 'its a mehhh for me.
This world is divided into 2 world, first human world and secondly of course our world.
Raivi squinted as if to say, 'you know' and she looked even more confused.
"I'm so happy Paps..Good things we're skinless and bones. I'm afraid I would have squeezed the guts outta ya!"
For a moment, I thought I was looking the four maidens in the rwby universe with a young Spring maiden standing to the left, a middle-aged fall maiden to the right, and an older winter maiden standing directly in front of me. In spite of their apparent ages, the shape of their faces, the strange colors of their skin
And we could all use a little change
And all that glitters is gold
"It's me, Sul. Are you okay? I heard you mumbling in your sleep, and your eyes were open, I could see them glow, Maila, glow. What happened?"
You're bundled up now, wait till you get older
But the meteor men beg to differ