The writing is fun and vivid, the progression in levels and skills is consistent, with each accounted for.Its plot structure and characters, the personalities, and everything, they click.Yes, they click. 10 outta 10, and better than other factory-produced creatures that pervade this place.Happy reading. Happy writing.
tanatos.. for real??!! guys don't it sound familiar.. 'thanos'!!!
Hey there!I just finished reading your story, and I’m completely blown away! Your writing is so captivating, and I couldn’t help but picture how amazing it would look as a comic.I’m a professional commissioned artist, and I’d be super excited to bring your story to life in comic form. no pressure, though! I just think it would be a perfect fit.If you’re interested, hit me up on Instagram (@lizziedoesitall) or Discord (lizziedoesitall). Let me know what you think!Cheers,Lizzie
I feel the Ntr in this isn’t needed tbh , almost like there’s no reason why there should be Ntr at all. Would there be a redemption arc later?
Best novel .....we need more chapters??................................................???????????????????????????????????????????
i enjoyed reading this book it's very nice
Se ve que es una buena historia , espero que no me equivoque .
haven't read it yet, but all the other novels I've read from this guy were super good ( I haven't read much of villain cultivator since dual cultivation isn't my cup of tea)
I'm speechless. Only 10 chaps in and I can say this is shaping up to be one of the best works of literature my eyes have ever witnessed. The dialogue is intriguing, the characters are compelling all in all, nice work author.
As you can see by the amount of votes i was a fan of this novel unfortunately the author is dishonest about the content of the novel, he is shackled by the same cliche and disgusting incel behavior thay majority of authors on webnovel suffer.There would be absolutely no freaking problem if he said in either the tags or comments what the story would be.But he lied and made it seem like it’s a revenge story with a puppet king who takes back his rightful throne.Which didn’t happen the mc is a pathetic little twirp who feels guilty for the girls who betrayed him and wants to help and save them.
So good honestly wish it updated every hour ?
I don’t know if this was intentional but synopsis is very misleading.If you are expecting a story where the mc owns a card store and his power is to use the cards he made to affect reality, you are dearly mistaken.Apparently, the shop isn’t even his. In order to gain new cards, cards that HE made, he needs purchase them from the shop owner. It also seems like other people can enter and purchase these cards considering how accessible the shop is. The mc’s power of card actualization doesn’t even feel like his own power. It seems like something the keeper granted to him seeing as he has to not only go to the shop but stay in it to open cards and actualize them.To be honest I’m just disappointed on what I expected not being what I actually got. I’m not the only one who feels this way, so I think a good idea for the author is to change synopsis to make it clearer on what to expect from the story.