Super good novel waiting for more from the author I hope for better updates
Enjoyed it so far. Wish it had more chapters and more than 2 daily. :(
Hopefully it won't become 1 chapter each day in the end like some others that had 4 daily and went down to 2. I can't wait to see what happens further! good luck to the translator! :D
its realy good although it has a little cliche in the first chapters but story line and world background is one of the best its realy a very unique novel good job author keep going (if you have time you can rewrite first chapters any way its a nice work thanks)
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In what world is plagiarism okay? Quit making up reasons to claim other people's content under your own name and try to wring some ideas out of that thing you call a brain.
This is quite a great novel not fast paced or slow paced. The plot is quite thick and mc is not OP from the start it seems like his powers have 9 seals for now he unlocked his 2nd one he can type 100 lines of codes he also started to cultivate his in the first stage 2nd lvl or gate whatever it looks like he is good friends with the clans head daughter its not of the stage where there is love i hope that it does develope there soon mc started to cultivate late in his age but he recoded his body to gather qi a LOT faster so he should be able to catch with other people mc is lvl headed i like that a lot i just hope he is not dense and i hope for a harem xD
What is even going on?
I enjoy my fair share of garbage novels and generally don't review them negatively, but this one makes no sense. Nothing is explained whatsoever. What is this tower? What are these territories? Where are they fighting?
Another example of confusion: Guy uses a 10000 times card on a newborn wolf to grow it to a youth. But 10000 times what? Times 1 second or 1 minute or 1 day? No one knows.
Even garbage novels need to have some semblance of sense. Absolute vomit tier novel.
My only complain is that even thought it has the system tag I haven't seen a single instance of the mc or another character using a system he says he awakened one in like the first couple of chapters but then he never mentioned it again until the point I'm currently at.
It's a great novel, the character development is especially good
I read until ch.12 and couldn't continue. The amount of language mistakes makes reading a chore and confusing so I couldn't continue. The story seemed to progress nicely but I got sick of reading
Wow! bro what a story. Mostly perfect grammar and I love the way you write, the build up to the story. It's beautifully paced, making for totally an immersive reading. There are however a few errors of note. In your synopsis you mentioned, " ...the universe was not done with him and made him awaken in another world. You could have said instead, "...brought him back in another world. On to the chapter I you state that Aiden was perplexed by 'the lack of support from the police'. Regardless of how vicious or how much of a menace to society his victim was, the police will just consider anyone who kills this rotten apple as a criminal and not as a saviour. That's standard police rational, it's just black and white in their reasoning there are no grey areas. In that regard you might want to say instead, that Aiden was perplexed by the lack of impartiality by the police, as they had already convinced themselves that he was guilty of the crime without bothering to give him the benefit of the doubt. Otherwise... excellent writing bro. Keep up the very high standard.
It's a very interesting novel and has an outstanding quality, from the grammar, to the characters, to the world building, everything is perfect. Because it's entertaining, I give it five stars.By the way, don't forget to stop by my profile to get an amazing novel too.