It’s ok it kinda sucks tho. Jdjdjdhdjdjdhdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjhddhhdhjddddddhdhhffhfhfhfjdjbdbhdhdbdbdbfbdbfbdbdbdndndndndndndsorry for that I don’t know anything else to say lol
I enjoy this outbreak idea, really timely. And then there's an evil businessman, a miraculous prophet, and some nosy media men. I love how the plot thickens. Good job! ❤️❤️
Hmm, it starts off a bit confusing as the MC is 10,000 years from the future or the past..... either way, starts off with our reincarnated MC being trash. There is the usual storyline, nothing too interesting, but not overbearing.
DISCLAIMER: I only made it to around chapter 20, the review is based on those chapters.
Oh boy.
This novel is absolutely horrendous.
To start of, writing quality is a dumpster fire, there are tons of plot holes and inconsistencies which you cover up by saying,
‘Mc who has no real life experience and only stayed home watching anime until the story started made a backup plan to the ****ty plan he made in the first place’
for example, him letting the other gangsters run away and *past* the zombies the Mc attracted w/ his gunshot instead of back into the theater. What was the backup plan anyway?
Something along the lines of ‘he had a backup plan for that anyway’ just doesn’t cut it.
And don’t even get me started on him not destroying his wrist with his shotgun. He shot it ONE HANDED. a SHOTGUN. instead this kid who happened to be the Mc has pinpoint Accuracy and insane logical thinking.
Now, the side characters. Ignoring that for some reason they’re all female except the poor shop workout without a name, it feels like even the ‘fleshed out’ ones are just cardboard cutouts. And why did you think TWO chapters of FILLER BACKSTORY would be a good idea? Nobody cares about this character and wasting time isn’t gonna help.
And please nobody even say something like ‘hmph, you are simply low iq without patience, the novel gets better you absolute cabbage..’ I don’t care if it gets better, the beginning is what hooks your reader.
I’m not wasting more time reading more of this poor excuse for a novel.
The character doesn't act like a normal human being. Literally everyone would wonder what suddenly happened to him but he still keeps trying to show off without control.
I really like these sort of stories where the main protagonist gets trapped inside a game. This story explores more options like the main protagonist is with his brother. Not many stories have this kind of setup! Good luck building up your world and its sytem, mate! ^^
So, by reading the synopses, I noticed that you are passing exactly through the same problem as I did when I started. You are not using full stops at all! I would recommend to buy grammarly or try google docs (I preffer grammarly, though.). Anyway, keep the good work. Gonna give a 5 stars since I can identify myself in your grammar. ;)
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If you're here for the r18 then go ahead but be warned after the first 200 chapters or so we discover that the MC is a piece of trash that doesn't care if an innocent is harmed if it's to achieve his goals. He's your typical wuxia young master that's a good guy on the outside but a scummy manipulative junk on the inside. I don't understand how a person so devoid of empathy can develop "love" for others. My guess is that it's just a possesive obsession fueled by lust. Romance this? Nah we are just following the adventures of a nymphomaniac
That s what you except from a person that transmigrated not the bull*hit Hero type MC. Good read hope it gets choosen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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