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this is cultivation novel everyone has been wanting forever. the mc is cold blooded and ruthless, isnt afraid to say what he wants, and he gets rid of enemies so they dont cause unnecessary problems. READ IT
A scarce goodie. A rare find in the web novels repertoire of works. I'll lurk in the darkness and strike from time to time to binge new chappies. Please keep it up. May the author write more, edit more, learn more, and even earn more.
This book is great and all, but the grammar is very frustrating to me. If you could somehow fix that, then I would be really happy. Other than the grammar everything is great, especially the character Erin.
It's worth taking the time to read.
I am not one to be intrigued by game worlds or those stuff but the way you wrote this book was really simple and easy to understand .
You have a vivid imagination of what you are writing and you display it very well.
You also have the tendency to repeat words like in chapter 1, you kept in repeating MIND whereas you can interchange with the synonyms of mind.
And this genre is not fantasy, it should sci-fi or another.
the story is good and it is great that the author already warned the reader or let just say he already set the expectations of readers in the level that he know the novel has and it make sense reading it knowing things.
To everyone who is starting this novel, ignore the criticisms from people about the novel early on. They think they have a point, but this novel takes more than 10-15 chapters to explain every single detail of why things happen. Trust me in that when you start reading more into it, it is much better than the average Webnovel story.
My fifth book! (and the first one I'm dedicated to finishing). I hope all of you enjoy it! If you can, just use a couple of seconds of your day to leave a power stone or a review. Thanks! :P
I want to see where this is goin.. Up till now its great read and bring no disappointment. Keep the good work author..
I need a filler, i need a filler.
so here's my review, The book's story is based on eastern fantasy and the book is like full of sarcasm. The mc Rant is a real troll. go guys read the book.
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