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First of all it started very good but as the story went on it started to get quite unrealistic and annoying, The MC is much more talented the other people yet he add a group of young people to his band? and all of them agree? they all move together? The MC adding them together was a mistake.In my opinion the story could've been the story would've been much more enjoyable if that didn't happen.
A heads-up before my review, I only read a fair amount of the translation. Most of it was in the raws. The reason for my low score is due to quality drop in the untranslated portion. An important note is that the translator is splitting up chapters, as seems to be common on WebNovel nowadays. So expect the chapter count of anything I mention to be at least double in the translation. The story starts off fairly slow and uncreative. However, as more characters are introduced, and they start new simulations, the story improves a lot. It's fairly interesting to see how the characters change the timeline, as well as how their actions influence each other.There is a downside to this though, as the author likes to repeat a lot of the things that happened on previous attempts. It's obviously just padding/filler. He also drags on when talking about the rewards characters get for completing the simulations.At this point, I'd still give the novel a good ol' 4 stars (which is a good score).Unfortunately, after around 210 chapters (raw), the author suddenly had what appears to be writer's block. For a while, I thought he dropped the novel entirely, but he just released chapters sparsely. It would have been better if he went on hiatus.I got to a little over 240 chapters before giving up. It was over 30 (non-split up) chapters of tens of thousands of year time skips in the simulation with no explanations of any story events going on, rewards are exaggerated, presented in a troll-like way, and outright skipped, and basically everything in the real world is people being amazed at the various characters group.This isn't an exaggeration like people like to do about cultivation novels. This is LITERALLY ALL that happens during those 30 chapters. Absolutely nothing about the simulation world is explained in that time, just literally "several thousand years later, she broke through. Several thousand more years later, she was surrounded and killed". No names are even mentioned in the simulation aside from their real names. Rewards say things like, "an insane, insane, insane amount of spirit stones. Amounts beyond all belief. Amounts that would make an entire city of people satisfied for generations. A city, do you know just how much that is!?" In the real world, nobody past Nascent Soul has been seen or heard of, so once everyone reaches those levels, along with their rewards, there is no threat. The author doesn't bother to introduce any either, so nobody dares to do anything aside from marvel at their growth.Even worse, it doesn't seem like this would change anytime soon. It deserves absolutely only 1 star at that point. So giving this story 3.0 for a good first arc seems more than fair. Maybe even a little generous for people who prefer ratings to represent the entire novel.
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I wrote this novel for myself, it’s very helpful as a guidebook for creating reality. God Blessed.
This is a really interesting and beautiful story. It's certainly inspired by "I'm Really Not the Evil God's Lackey
Outhor here i wrote a chapter the problem is idk how to upload it i need a code or somthing this is my first novel btw pls comment if you know im noob in this
The book gives an alluring scope to a young boy who almost lost everything and falls to despair but claws his way to a brighter fate. I like how incompetent they reacted to seeing alarming movement from potential aliens. It's the classic feigned ignorance that plunges the world to a dire consequence.
This novel is not good because MC is not the main character he is just a average Joe in that monster invasion world he doesn't have any special quirks he is downright average .
His age group cultivatied a technique to 10th level he will be only at 1st level. His monster is average,he is average, his family background is average, his friends are average , totally the book is average
Beautiful story..as a soccer player and a fan this story gave me alot of goosebumps. Kudos to the author for such a lovely story.. Wished it never ended
I just need to know when the sequel will be out
Me esta gustando bastante, la combinacion de cultura china y japonesa es fastante interesante, y itachi es uno de mis personajes favoritos al igual que muchos otros
