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Love it, can’t wait for the next issue. Love the way you’ve introduced the characters so far.
This review is as of chapter 25. I will rewrite this at a later time. Likely chapter 50-100 sometime between then.The book is worth a read. It has many strengths. But with it comes a few glaring weaknesses. Gramatical errors are few and far between. The authors ability to write is decent. A couple typos and missing words every few chapters but it doesn’t hinder the reading experience.The main character seems pretty decent. He’s enjoyable to be around and I can say with certainty he’s likeable. What I thought was going to be a garbage trope between the nobility and our Mc was trashed. Instead I have a unique fresh breath of air. The mc plans to not hide his strength (to an extent) and the “young master” role is filled by someone arrogant yet understandable. The biggest issue lies in the world. Our main character is constantly bullied by soldiers despite being just a child. It’s upsetting in a bad way. It seems pathetic and makes the viewer see them as a joke. It isn’t the best system. It feels often forced that he is bullied just for that tragic upbringing card to be played even more. But other than that I’ve yet to find any glaring issues. Good read worth everyone’s time.
Waiting here with my cold drink for a the smut chapters because ain't no werewolf book without a hot scenes ?. If you are on the same page with me, don't be shy. Hop on, let's navigate Violet wild adventure
Really big fan of the book. I really enjoy many of the side characters within the story. the MC's situation is also intriguing. it has the right amount of referencing what makes him special without throwing it in the readers face at every turn. you find yourself wondering how his abilities will impact his decision making and his power growth. the world building is also excellent, with the author doing a great job at providing the reader with enough information to understand the way the world works while still holding cards to his chest that surprise the reader while still making sense!I look forward to seeing the MCs continued growth and development of his relationships with his friends!
I am excited because beginnig is awsome. MC is an art piece in many ways, I love him already. Plot is humorous and unconventional.
nice novel why did you stop?...........
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
Ótima história, protagonista op, mas acho que você deve mudar essa personalidade, tornando o menos caricato, tirando isso podemos dizer que ele tem muito pinheiral
We are people who cannot be seen by creature called humans.
Nurseperson push me on the chair and open my wrapped clothes.
-não dar para fazer nada… o deus que morreu foi morto por isso. E além do mais isso devidi o meu poder ao meio com você então não dar para fazer nada.
