The action and thriller is too awesome. Story line are amazing with how the author can be creative. Don't just read my review and start reading it.
I enjoyed reading this novel! It has a good concept and interesting plot. I do think there are some things that could be better like grammar. Also the flow of events could have better transitions. But you can tellthe author is working hard on improving their writing as you read along.
An amazing start to the story with lots of potential although there were some missed opportunities, but by having the nine headed hydra as a potential spirit he could have the MC look for the 9 offspring of the dragon god as the spirit rings for it. Also although it is a little fast pace at the beginning and some embarrassing moments would be fun to read about, but lets face it in Soul Land fan-fictions the story doesn't really start till they are 6 yrs old.
Looks good but I wish that other NPC mob was translated instead. Can't remember but it showed up here as well. He became a Final Boss and journeys a long with the Players and harasses them. It had a better summary!
I dont know what to put here I just want this novel to be picked for translation.haaaaaaaaaaaaaqaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaàaaaàààæààæaaaaa
Two words? Simply amazing.I don't usually write reviews but I simply had to for this great story.It's still too early and we haven't gotten to the part of the class yet but that's not a problem.The way that this is written is brilliant! The comments of other players, the witty remarks, great and funny references, give it a certain...energetic feeling. I could actually feel the excitement of the players about the game.All in all, this is great and you mr. author are great. I'm looking forward to reading the story as it unfolds.
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I really like the topic of the martial arts, but I love that is also with some love between the characters.Also I would like a more complete description of the sorroundings, I get his in ancient China and all but, is he in the mountains? Is there plenty of forests around?
Trash grammar, immature story, horrible writing that you cannot make sense of. Even though the concept is interesting the things i mentioned above and many more make continuing this novel not possible for me at this moment. And honestly just look at the titles and you will understand the level of this novel.
We are done with log in novels now the new trend is simulation? Bruhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I have only given 5 stars to four novels so far...Your novel is awesome bro...........................................Keep Doinggg....................
Every time I read the term Goblin I can't separate the aesthetics from the built in DnD, but I've always believed that the authors don't observe the goblinoid value as race to the human plot. Denisova and Neanderthals disappeared early in our world. The idea of two races with different intelligence sharing the same world would be brutal. The author could even simplify by making humans tame goblins with language and goblins enslave humans with torture, with pariahs on both sides to avoid strong censorship. Anyway, I put this comment in this text because invokers usually tend to have a little used and even repetitive plot. :)