An amazing start to the story with lots of potential although there were some missed opportunities, but by having the nine headed hydra as a potential spirit he could have the MC look for the 9 offspring of the dragon god as the spirit rings for it. Also although it is a little fast pace at the beginning and some embarrassing moments would be fun to read about, but lets face it in Soul Land fan-fictions the story doesn't really start till they are 6 yrs old.