PizzaillafUR
I have completed reading the novel on the app. And I am so glad I was able to stumble upon this magnificent story. Every chapter is worth reading for. And I think almost all of the chapters have action scenes. This is a must read.
Up to where i stopped reading, there wasnt. However, considering the "no harem" tag, then most likely there will be
Then read gamer superstar
from the summary I see its somewhat similar to SAO? am I correct??
Fair enough lol
I'm surprised to see this here its a really good read if you can ignore the nationalism and biases, as it covers at least more than half of the characters if not all. its a good past time.
another thing , (I'm not sure if its allowed so I wont mention the name or add link), this is completed in a different site with real low quality(maybe MTL) translation, but if you mastered the dao of trashlation you'll understand it.
awesome piece author, I must say I enjoyed the first two chapters I read?? Keep up the goo work
Everything messed up at dwarf kingdom arc
the power system and it's explanation is hard to grasp(for me atleast). something about this world...it's just feels ...dunno how to say it...something is not good about it. main plot is very good tho
I dropped this after 320 chapters. The story is interesting, the lore is attractive and with a slow space and a part of the time you don't have enough information and the MC. My biggest problem is that this story has disorganized chapters out of place. These are the memoirs of the MC or something similar to it, each volumen represents some part of the story of the MC. But they are not necessarily in chronological order. That's all nice and all, but when you get to a pick in the story and suddenly start a new volumen and is of another point of the life the MC is sharing,the worst part is that there is not even a little bit of preambule to this change, the new volume starts with a character you don't know or care taking half a chapter. There are chapters of other volumes in between. You end up unblocking a chapter to find it was from the previous volume. And this last thing is really problematic, as the authordoesn't seem to care or try to correct this mistake.
The start is dynamic and attractive, while usually, the norm is to write in the past tense author had chosen to use present but it's not a bad thing per se. Character design is unique and genuine in my opinion.there is no information dumping and the story flows appropriately which is good. Updates are stable enough that readers don't have to wait. the only flaw I found in the narration is that it is tough to read conversations because there is no gap between them and it leads to confusion about who is saying what and which part is said and which part is not. I think it can be corrected easily so it's not a big issue. good luck for the author.
for all the people saying the mc is a pedo. it was a mistranslation. the girl is 20 and not 12. the numbers are extremely similar in chinese, so the translator genuinely just made a mistake.
