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This novel is very good I actually quite liked this novel.but there is many problems in this novel. those are making mc as boy when he is talking with system,after his death he became girl its best he should call girl insted of boy and also his thought about going back to earth is unnecessary he knows he is dead in earth but he thinking of going back its make him stupid.
Boring. And stupid conversations ................. ...... ........... ................ So lame and too fast. No character building.. ......
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this novel is not for everyone... first author unnecessary comments, annoying.. mc character is not likable, he thinks he is the problem of everything too much, which many readers don't like it...and other things which I am not going to write...
One of the best writers on webnovel decides to make a novel about apocalypse and includes the same new concept of system from his previous novel ,I Hate Systems. There's no way it will be bad ! Read all the chapters already and can't wait for moreeeee
I really do love this amazing book, it's really perfect and really interesting to read ☺️☺️, Like seriously, I really love the book so very much ??..keep it up author ?
This book is one of my favorites and one of the best I've read so far.i like the story and the world so far. I can't wait to see what the next familiar will be I love dragons will it be another dragon or something else?
This novel has a great potential but you have your choices and I respect that but I just wanna say that your novel was great and interesting, it's just sad to know that you discontinued it but thanks for the novel man.
As a person who’s never read a BlackFlamer wn, here’s my review:Writing Quality: absolutely perfect, no grammatical errors.Updating Stability: Great so far, but there’s like no chapters out rn so I won’t comment on thatStory Development: Only a few chapters out but pacing’s been perfectChara Design: Good so far, characters seem more than one-dimensional but there’s not enough chapters to talk about that kekWorld Background: Not enough chapters for that, but it seems like there’s something, and that something’s pretty goodOverall, 4.4 from me
There is so much to say. But I'm too lazy to write. Harem.
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