Super funny also nice touch of humour the Mc is not a harem or bump into and make out with every female type thankfully but that’s probably what’s bringing down the ratings besides bots and people who only like the blandest of story’s with an mc that has a harem, is stupid and rapes female’s every chance he gets
This story definitely has it’s moments. The first few chapters were a bit sluggish to wade through, but it’s passable. Most of my negative experience from this is a run on sentence or laughably unedited chapters. There are some definite highlights within here, but it is locked behind some content that most would stop at. Should give this a read if you have seen your fair share of some pretty sluggish intros.-Spoilers!-The most egregious of the unedited chapters is when Chrome attacks the starting city. In chapter 38 - Unaltered quote from this scene, “ charged forward in a soeed thatvwasn’t seen yet and their jumping abilities and used them and their fearlessness to jump ...” This scene instantly broke any semblance of immersion I had . I would definitely recommend either a proofreader, grammerly, or an editor.-Spoiler end!- In the end, this is a decent novel that has a sluggish start and needs a editor of some kind to fix some basic problems. Probably will stop reading at chapter 62 as the author put some pretty obvious soon to be romance into the thing. But that’s just personal preference.Not meant to be rude to the author or anything, but some proofreading will help the novel a lot.
After reading to about 170 chapter i just can't keep going.The dialogue and thoughts shouldn't both be in " " , Every-time i read something in " " i assume they are speaking only to see -thought XX. Sometimes it seems like they are thinking, but it turns out he is speaking. It's like a goddamn guessing game every-time you see " " you can't be sure if they are speaking or thinking, so you have to read the whole line, read after it to know if those are thoughts or words and ONLY then you can insert it into the story. So many times i get it wrong. Really the worst thing about this novel is that, at this point im just tired of the guessing game.
Bad parts first: Grammar mistakes that you won't even notice if you are not aware of how to write a novel. In short, you won't have any problem reading this since it's smooth. Better English than 95% trash novels in this site.Good parts: IT'S SO DAMN INTERESTING! The plot is like a breeze of fresh air on this website that is filled same shitty plot in cultivation stories. I only have one thing to say, STOP READING REVIEWS AND START READING STORY AND GET HOOKED BY IT.
I thought it was going to be difficult to get through the first chapter because of the info dump but then it kept on going if you can't handle at minimum three chapters of info dump give up now
An author with a lot of egoistic and misguided nationalism who thinks chinese are gods and all other races are villans and underdeveloped.let me tell you author all the inheritance china was obtained from indian monks.even the buddhism and its techniques came to china from india.indian monks saw the lives of chinese living like animals,so they passed their knowledge to correct and better their lives.its ok to be proud of your country but its not ok to think you are above others.it disgusts non chinese readers and all your good writing skills are gone to waste.atleast try reading comments at end of every f*ckedup "i am a super chinese MC" chapter and you will understand.
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My Favorite Book from Qidian is finally translated. Highly recommended to read it. I will be an avid reader of this novel. Please translate until end...?#PositiveReview#SupportTranslator#SpecialReader#FinishTheBook#DontHiatus#GoodBook#HighQualityTranslationFollow my Tiktok : @douyin_land
Pilot read failed not alot of people read the Pilot so they cancelled the novel.
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it's good but, I want more. It feels like it ended without finishing the story.