So far the story seems very enjoyable. There are a lot of interesting ideas, but the writing quality and the details throughout the story need a bit fleshing out. I feel like this can potentially become a very good novel. :)Actually, I'm interested in giving feedback and editing your chapters before release.Contact me if you are interested. ??
Firstly, I liked to say that I am a TBATE fan, and when I first saw this, like many other tbate fans, it had me a bit off guard. I've knew for a long time that some other fans like to write fan-fics, or other "novels" that's heavily similar to or even the same as TBATE. I first debated if I should read this since I thought that the story would just be similar and all that stuff, but thankfully, I gave it a chance.Now I like to move onto the ratings:Writing Quality- I really love the writing quality of this novel, like some other review, grammar has nothing on Kenkan. The writing is a part of why I love this novel so much now, things are being explained very well in his writing.Stability of Updates- Kenkan updates at least once everyday, and if he doesn't he will update us readers/audience of why he couldn't update as much. I really encourage the readers to read his author notes because it gives us a lot of important info. This section of my rating is another part of how I am sticking to this novel so far.Story Development- The story development if very good IMO. The pace is going pretty well, but sometimes it can get a bit faster then normal and I think thats okay. Like I said in my "Stability of Updates" section, Ken does asks questions on how we want the story to be paced and how it is going to go. He is very considerate on our comments and puts our thoughts into whats going to happen in the next chap. Character Design- This connects quite a lot to my "Writing Quality" section, his writing makes emotions flow out of the characters, sadness, happiness, regret, sorrow, excitement, e.t.c. I don't have much to say in this section but I'm satisfied on how the characters are so far.World Background- Kenkan explains the world background pretty well, in some chapters he will explain things about the world and its system while in others, he just fixes his time onto the plot. IMO, he doesn't rush in detailing the world in the story, Ken doesn't put too little or too much information in his paragraphs. Overall, I give this book a 5/5, for my taste I really do love (addicted) this novelSo, please for new readers (mostly for readers who also read TBATE) to give this book a chance even if the cover and title looks similar because the author did explain in one of his chapters that he will be changing some things about this book soon (including the cover and title), also check the paragraph comments since he also does answer reader questions in there.
i am actually interested in original novel... seems like a good read..however this westernized POS totally kills any value of this novel. instead of transmigration into past with historical knowledge, it becomes generic transmigration into the past in authors fantasy world. ffs idk why i even try "new novels" when they are mostly generic westernized POS.
Great story, great writing, great originality, great characters, great development... Basically great everything.The only flaw - then only thing I'm unhappy about - the only thing that's not great (lol), is the lack of release schedule...Don't get me wrong, I would love it if 2-10 chapters were released every day... that would be great! BUT, I understand that the author has a life. And I understand that the reason the writing and everything is so good, is because the author takes their time to write it rather than forcing themselves to crank out a chapter every day - So I can live with there being a fair while between releases.BUT, I wish there was a schedule... For example, releasing a chapter every month on a set day (though two per month would be better!)...It's just that without a schedule and with so long between releases, I check for a new release every day... Often multiple times per day (pathetic, I know, but I really love this story!) And I spend the whole time worrying it's been dropped! :'(But if there were a schedule, I wouldn't get my hopes up every day and I wouldn't have to worry about it being dropped unless a scheduled release date was missed.So Author, if you're reading this & haven't dropped it (Please don't drop it! But if you have, please let us know so I can stop worrying & hoping!), you should consider a schedule.Thanks for everything.Cheers, Guy.
The synopsis attracted me and the story itself made me stay. I really love this novel and the chapter release rate of the author is also so fast. Please don't exhaust yourself Mr. author and I really hope the novel keeps going. I will not talk about the story as its just better to go and read it instead. I'll be just spoiling the good fun.Keep up the good work!
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That’s my first novel hope you will enjoy it! I’m improving with each chapter and always will try to release at the best and fastest time i can.
One of the best cultivation novels i have ever read from character development to world building and humor. I dont understand why this story is not at least in the top 100.
It's a really good read. The fact that it's completely free and contains almost 500 chapters is an even bigger bonus. The world-building is a strong point, and the egocentric and frankly "villainous" character of the main character adds to the originality of the story. Some narrative devices may be a little overused, but overall it's good. I hope this story won't be abandoned, good luck autor!
it is an excellent i have read its comic as well and very very interesting, funny, action and all other things packed in it. the Su Yu does things and end up on top with miaomiao the dog is too hilarious.
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This is a pretty well written and enjoyable book.I’ve read several “system” novels and this one is probably in my top 5 just because of the realistic dialogue between the protagonist and the system.There’s a little bit of questionable character development regarding certain side characters but nothing that takes away from the content.Author also does well with handling properly given criticism and communicates well at the moment. (10/2/18)Will update if necessary.